title :: the word 'recrudescence' is rarely used, so many might not know the meaning of it of the story, to fix this i would put the definition of the word in the
cover :: i think the graphics are of low quality and that it doesn't really say anything about the book.
description :: as said in the title part, maybe add a definition of 'recrudescence' to it
prologue / first chapter :: it starts off smoothly, and has a good mix of dialogue and descriptive text, i just feel like the dialogue between the father and daughter is a bit too formal to be realistic
writing style :: it flows well and i like that you use the italics for thoughts, which you use a lot
plot and setting :: the plot is rare, and it’s hard to find a proper outline of the plot, but it is enjoyable to read
characters :: the characters are unique, but i feel like they should be more 3d, give them compatible and clashing personalities
miscellaneous :: n/a
overall :: it’s a good story ! maybe try to improve the characters and how they interact with one another
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