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Review #43: @ShwetaKumari426

Title: Let's Plan My Murder! (Romance) [✔️]
Author: @ShwetaKumari426
Reviewer: CatLoverHope

   1. First and foremost, let's talk about the things the readers see/notice first about the book.
Title:
The title seems very carefree and spontaneous, and matches the story very well! It has that twist in it, which makes me feel like this:

Cover:
The cover has that dramatic and romantic vibe that makes me really anticipate the story.

Blurb:
The blurb is decent, but it could use some more of that drama factor that the author constantly uses in the book, or maybe it could be made less informative about the characters and more about the actual story and what it'll give a person. Also, there is a grammar mistake; the twenty-one-years-old is grammatically incorrect, as numbers above or 10 itself are written in the numerical form. The correct form would be, 21 years old (not hyphenated because the age comes after the noun.)

2. Now, let's get on with talking about the content of the book!

Character Development:
I can very well see the character development and how their personality changes. There's also so many revelations and overall tea spilled, it really makes me giddy like never before!

Mood/Scenetic Development:
The way the mood in the story is built up really affects me like it should: I giggle(embarrassinggg), I scream "OMG SUCH A JERK", et cetera. The thing I think would need help would be conveying sadness. The author should try to describe the feeling of the characters in such a way that it's pitiable but relatable at the same time.

Writing Style:
The writing style of this book, as i said before, really builds mostly all moods. I think the most important things to improve are the paragraphs and how to divide them. Try to divide the descriptions of a character in a different paragraph, the descriptions of feelings in a different paragraph from the events taking place. Also, I think a little longer chapters would be a huge plus. The author need not drag the scenes, but just make the tea more lasting, this is just a suggestion though, from my perspective.

Starting and Ending of Chapters:
I think the starting of some of the chapters could be more of rollercoaster in some of the chapters,not all. This would be a huge interest-factor.
The ending are usually very good, I love the seemingly small but actually huge cliffhangers, they make me want to read the story with more concentration. Now this is actually very unique, I'm not exaggerating!

Grammar:
The grammar in the book is very good! I would just like to point out that uses of commas, colons et cetera (not too much) would spice things up a little. Also, the tense in which the scenes are written is simple present tense, but it would be more appealing in a past perfect tense or some scenes in present perfect tense. Maybe switching between active and passive voices would also make things more appealing.

Overall Thoughts:
I really loved reading this book, it was amazing! It was cliché, which could be, in my opinion, a badge of honour if used right, and it was definitely used right! Along with this, it also had that unique twist that was just lovely to imagine and read. There just need to be some improvements,  o thing majour, and this book would be literal perfection in my eyes, as my reviewing stands now.
Thank you for filling out the form for this amazing book. This masterpiece is going in my reading list stat!