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Hey guys..here's another story..it's on swaragini plot but raglak roles are reversed.. basically what if laksh was in ragini's place...it start from starting of serial..all characters are same..
Here it is.....

In a beautiful Mansion we can see a lady doing Pooja..all family members are standing behind her ..she turns to give aarti to everyone ...she goes towards dp nd gives him aarti..
Dp looks around nd shakes his head,"Aaj phir Pooja mein nahi aaya..abhi tak so raha h wo nalayak,pata nahi kya hoga iss ladke ka"
Ap-aap chinta kyu karte h dheere dheere jimmedar ban jaega..
Dp-kab??aur ye Kya h raat ko late aana aur subah late uthna..samjhao kuch apne bete ko...
Ap-thik h m baat karungi usse...aap chinta mat kijiye..

In a beautiful room we can see a guy sleeping...whole room was a mess but he was sleeping without a care...a girl comes and seeing the room's state keeps her palm on her head..shaking her head she tries to wake him up..
Girl-bhai uth jaiye...
Guy-sone do uttu..raat ko bahut late soya tha..
Uttara-aap ki aisi harkaton se bade papa itne naaraj rehte h..abhi bhi gussa kar rhe the ..aap aaj phir Pooja m nahi aaye..
Guy-yaar wo Hitler ko sirf gussa karna hi aata h,usme Kya naya h...
Uttara-ab uthiye aap..warn wo aur gussa ho jaenge..
Guy-hone do..I don't care
Uttara gets irritated nd throws a glass of water on him
Guy with a jerk wakes up nd he is

I don't careUttara gets irritated nd throws a glass of water on himGuy with a jerk wakes up nd he is

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Laksh(with annoyed face)-what the hell... u chipkali..
Uttara(giggling)- ab m Kya karu aap uth hi nhi rhe the..ab jaldi chaliye nahi toh bade papa aur gussa ho jaenge..
Laksh -aata hu ..waise b yeh Hitler mujhe chain se jeene nhi denge...

After some time he comes downstairs nd hugs ap from behind..
Laksh- gm maa..
Ap holds his ear nd brings him forward,"gm k bacche, yeh koi time h uthne ka.."
Laksh-ahhh ma kaan chodo,it's paining..
Ap-kahan the tum Kal raat.?
Laksh-wo mein Omi k saath party m tha..
Ap-laksh tum kab sudhroge..tumhare papa ko yeh Sab bilkul achcha nhi lagta..
Laksh-offo ma aap bhi na..waise where is that Hitler husband of urs??
Ap-shut up..apne papa ko Hitler Bolte ho..tumhara wait karte karte office chale gaye..ab shaam ko tumhari class lagegi...
Laksh- thank God abhi toh bach gaya..ok maa jaldi se breakfast lagado na ..mujhe Omi se Milne jana h..plz
Ap-raat ko toh uske saath the ab Kya kaam h..Pura din bas time pass karte ho..thoda toh responsible ban jao..
Laksh- ban jaunga..Kya jaldi h..abhi toh jaane do..
Ap(makes a face)-thik h ..bt waapas jaldi aana..
Laksh(kisses her cheek)-ok ..u r d best..luv u..

In a cafe laksh and Omi were sitting nd chatting...
Omi-kya hua aaj Sheena nhi dikh rhi..
Laksh(non chalantely)- Kal Maine us se breakup kar liya..
Omi-what..ek aur ladki se breakup..God lucky kabhi toh relationship ko seriously le..
Laksh- chill yaar ...we were just dating casually.....and every girl I date know that I m nt serious..it's not like ki maine kisika Dil toda h..
Omi-i know but ek ladki ko chun jisse tu actually pyaar kare..
Laksh-pyaar nd me huhh..me kisi ek ladki k piche Puri life nhi bhaag sakta...u know it's a matter of my reputation..aur aaj tak aisi koi nhi mili jiske liye m efforts karu..
Omi- whatever....waise aisi koi toh ladki hogi jiske liye "The Great Laksh Maheswari" mehnat kare..??
Laksh-umm agar aisi koi h toh I m sure she will be one in a million...

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