Now that this story is completed, *snifflfe sniffle*, I know... I am open for some feedback. Please answer the questions below inline.
Thank you!
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1) Did the story hold your interest from the very beginning? If not, why not?
2) Was it clear at the beginning whose story it is, and where and when it's taking place? If not, why not?
3) Could you relate to the main character?
3b) Did you feel her/his pain or excitement?
4) Did the setting interest you and did the descriptions seem vivid and real to you?
5) Was there a point at which you felt the story lagged or you became less than excited about finding out what was going to happen next? Where, exactly?
6) Were there any parts that confused you? Or even frustrated or annoyed you? Which parts, and why?
7) Did you notice any discrepancies or inconsistencies in time sequences, places, character details, or other details?
8) Were the characters believable? Are there any characters you think could be made more interesting or more likable?
9) Did you get confused about who's who in the characters? Were there too many characters to keep track of? Too few?
10) Did the dialogue keep your interest and sound natural to you?
11) Did you feel there was too much description or exposition? Not enough? Maybe too much dialogue in parts?
12) Was there enough conflict, tension, and intrigue to keep your interest?
13) Was the ending satisfying? Believable?
14) Do you think the writing style suits the genre? If not, why not?
15) Have you started reading the sequel?
Thank you all so much!
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Time
Historical FictionWe are told "time heals all wounds" and "only time will tell". Time is a precious thing. It's a gift. Time decides so much. It can change quickly or seem to morph in slow motion. Time is undefined. What would happen if we travelled through time...
