A fanfiction based on: Don't Toy With Me, Miss Nagatoro (Ijiranaide, Nagatoro-san)
The sequel to Cherry Blossom Palette, Naoto Hachioji and his friends enjoy a summer of fun, friendship, and love.
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Author's note:
ED: Sorry it's been longer than normal, but we needed to fix a few things. Here's a shorter but beefy chapter to finish off the "Crime and Punishment" chapters.
Naoto and Gamo-chan stumble through the afternoon, looking for a little hope.
The release does allow PS to promote my new chapter the same day Nanashi poops out his own fresh, steaming, uneventful chapter, where he depicts Hana-chan (fourth best girl!) as an imbecile, so he's hoping for some fresh eyes. But it's a good chance everyone already knows my story exists.
I sort of wish that I'd divided up the first four chapters differently (maybe into six or seven of them), but I just didn't like the way it read.
It would've been nice to get a few weeks further ahead of schedule, but I'm satisfied with how the first four chapters flow.
So... next week will be a bi-week. The "Fyodor Dostoevsky" chapters took a LONG TIME to edit and work through.
Also, PS and I both have some IRL stuff we need to work on in the next couple weeks, so this will keep us from falling behind too much, hopefully.
Don't expect more chapters as big as the first three. I don't want to go through this again.
But the karaoke party chapter is next, so look forward to that!
Crunchyroll made the dub even worse.
Ask us anything, and we'll add a Q&A section in the next chapter. I would be happy if you ask questions.
Really, questions and comments are appreciated. Feedback helps. I'm not writing for glory, but it's a lot more pleasurable when readers seem engaged and interested. Nothing kills drive like plummeting interest.
Maybe starting a new story was a mistake, instead of continuing the first story. PS thinks a number of regular readers never moved onto the second story, which is silly because I made it quite clear I'd be starting a new story in the final chapters of the first story. But people don't always read author's notes.
