Short Story Notice and Questions

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Hallo,

So... yeah... hi. Um, i haven't upload Forever Now in such a long time and i wanted to explain why that was. For one, inspiration hasn't hit or hasn't hit in the correct way. I got ideas, mostly from dreams that i've had but converting said ideas into writing is proving difficult. Two, i'm having way too much fun writing *insert title here*. Third, I've been having health problems and sitting in front of the computer for long periods of times is not bueno.

Forever Now:

This story has had its ups and downs... i've re-read it about 5 times and each time i get the feeling that, although i know what i'm trying to convery, i'm not getting my point across. But i guess thats true about every story because its up to the reader to interperate the messages given by the author. So far, in 20 some chapters, not many things have happened. Mikaela and Kryzstofer have had some alone time, fights, gigantic slapping fights, and confusing times. I think Mikaela was written in a limited scope meaning i feel that she is too limited in what she does.

So, in the next few chapter i might end up going a little AU or OOC (Alternative Universe or Out of Character) to try to continue the story so that it fits with what i have planned. Kryzstofer strikes me as stiff but i like him. Hixak is too much like the man i pictured him to be, Tom Kaulitz, so i like him. 

There are a few loose ends i will be tying up in the next chapter or so to lead this story to its end. Perhaps i will do short stories on a few characters, y'll can suggest any character or plot and i shall make a story.

About New Short Story:

Anyway, whatever i end up naming my new short story, i will say that its nice trying not to get into the head of Mikaela for a change and be more uptight. I love being up tight and controlling because its who i am as a person. Its more me, than Mikaela whose all about kicking but, having fun and rejecting her emotions. 

The short story is essentially about two people already intriduced in this story, Hixak and *someone else*, and how they came to be together. Hixak, obviously, left the Now (heaven) to start a revolution in the In-Between, leaving behind everything he knew, everyone he loved, for something he believed in. Now, i am not gonna write about Hixak and his revolution. I'm writing from his lover's perspective simply because i rather not go on a rant about revolutions and stuff. Plus, i think it will give Hixak a background which he lacks in Forever Now. 

The story is seperated into three parts, as i said earlier, with a title and a song attached to them.

Part One: The Story

Part Two: Was it a dream?

The titles are songs from my new favorite band, 30 Seconds to Mars. These songs are awesomely beautiful, the lyrics are heart breaking and Jared Leto's voice (and him in general) is to die for.

Any questions feel free to comment on here or on my wall and i'll answer them as soon as i can. 

Love,

Adrianna

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