Submission

Submission

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korielyn By korielyn Updated 3 days ago

Highest ranking #1 as on 4th july, 2017

"Tell me you are mine" the cold,sharp,merciless blade tried to force me into submission. Into HIS submission. I am not a property that anyone can own.

 "I-I am yours". Green is supposed to be my favourite colour but as I look into his green merciless eyes I feel nothing but fear.

 "Good girl. Now, we don't want your dear ones hurt do we?"
      
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  Life is never easy and it won't ever be. It's harder when you have demons of your past and devils in your present to fight against. No one wants to loose but how long can you keep yourself stable? Only the strong and brave survives in the race.....is she strong and brave?

Triggers and smuts are present.


A BIG THANKS TO :

Ms_Book_Worm for the beautiful cover!!

      
      I love you guys and please take good care of yourselves.
      
      much love,
      
      korielyn.

wigglysubu wigglysubu May 06
You're beautiful honey, you're you and nobody's luggage 😢
                              If only she could see the comments section 😭😭
t_truthreades t_truthreades 3 days ago
Abuse has become a serious issue for so many young people and their families
Titanic....NEAR, FAR, WHERE EVER YOU ARE...I BELIEVE THAT THE HEART WILL...THE HEART WILL GO ON AND ON....
afrid2002 afrid2002 May 22
That's a great start for your story. Sad and appealing. You're writing style is simple but marvellous. This chapter sounds more like a prologue though.
This is definitely very exciting I am curious if the direction this will take!