Submission

Submission

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korielyn By korielyn Completed

Highest ranking #1 as on 4th July 2017

"Tell me you are mine" the cold, sharp, merciless blade tried to force me into submission. Into HIS submission. I am not a property that anyone can own.

 "I-I am yours". Green is supposed to be my favorite color but as I look into his green merciless eyes I feel nothing but fear.

 "Good girl. Now, we don't want your dear ones hurt do we?"
      
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  Life is never easy and it won't ever be. It's harder when you have demons of your past and devils in your present to fight against. No one wants to lose but how long can you keep yourself stable? Only the strong and brave survives in the race.....is she strong and brave?

Triggers are present.

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      I love you guys and please take good care of yourselves.
      
      much love,
      
      korielyn.

  • anxiety
  • cliffhangers
  • dangerous
  • depression
  • disorders
  • domination
  • hell
  • kidnap
  • mature
  • mystery
  • obsession
  • possessive
  • stalker
  • submission
  • suspense
  • teacher
  • thriller
  • triggers
  • twists
  • wattys2017
1-800chokeAhoe 1-800chokeAhoe 6 days ago
Girl in my school we don't go in the gym for pe we say inside and jot down notes for the exams
l815022 l815022 Jan 09
Ahaha wrong, once I leave I ain’t never gonna take a PE class ever again
briianna_ss briianna_ss Nov 24, 2018
I actually like pe 🤣 but this is the last year I’m taking that class cus in high school every student is required to take pe for two years..
Submarine_Kaylin Submarine_Kaylin Dec 03, 2018
a lot of this reminds me of other things like twilight and shane dawson
explxsion explxsion Nov 22, 2018
I love the Rain too!!! The after smell of rain mixed with the nature smell is the best!! I always loved the rain, I never really like the cold or hot either
AntagonistDmitri AntagonistDmitri Nov 20, 2018
YO... I THOT THE SAME THING AS I DID LAST TIME.... I WAS ABOUT TO XOMMENT “is u dumb” ^^^