The Bet That Broke Me *BOOK ONE*

The Bet That Broke Me *BOOK ONE*

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(BOOK ONE) Highest rank so far #2 in teen fiction *Needs Editing*

Meet Alison Kane,

Broken. I guess that's one of the many disconsolate words I could chose to describe myself. 

Broken and miserable. I was left that way five years ago on the day of my parents deaths. When I learned my brother, Ryan,  didn't want to take care of me because, as he put it, "Wanted to live his life." I was sent to Florida to live with my Aunt Lilly, Uncle David, and my cousin Hailey. My world kind of stopped spinning. I was for everchanged. I mean though, who wouldn't be? I was only thirteen and both my mom and dad had just passed and  my brother didn't want me. 


Aiden Parker. The name that changed my life. For better? Or for worse? I still haven't figured that out. But do please listen to my story. My story of how The Bad Boy Broke Me. How he bet on me. He made a bet for me to fall for him. How he broke me, but also how he saved me. A twisted way of doing so I guess but you'd have to read our story to understand what I mean. 

This has a few cliche scenes so if your not into that then don't read it. It has some cursing, but it's a great story so you don't know what your missing out on. 

here are some of my (many) fav comments from my readers.

JaydaSaylan3~ Im legit sobbing my sisters saying that I'm sobbing over a story that's not even real.

rmilyo107~ Im frickin crying, this should be a goddamn movie.

VaneEscorcia7 ~ This is the saddest thing I've ever read yo😭

Zoie-Jane~ Well my dreams have been crushed.

Ashnavarsani~ I can not believe this story made me cry like this is the first I have ever frickin cried like this.

thislilrussiangirl~ I started crying, then I sneeze-farted and half-pissed myself in the middle of class. THIS IS ALL YOUR FUALT AUTHOR

Jelena4ever123~ U have to do a sequel I can't live like this.

truehope124~ Omfg sequel please

inspirationaljunkXD~ PLSSS MAKE A SEQUEL

Nicolerusu9090 Nicolerusu9090 3 days ago
oml my best friend  would beat the shiz outta them (also hi belle ur prob reading this ily)
Probably the most interesting Teen Fiction book I’ve read here.
River_Starr River_Starr 2 days ago
Yh that's right, I'm a female dog so you better move ur ass before i Bute you
tinsley_meows tinsley_meows 2 days ago
Not trying to be rude or anything but why do u keep chasing the spelling for Hailey's name
River_Starr River_Starr 2 days ago
I get super hungry throughout the whole day if I don't eat breakfast
Laney_Loves_Books Laney_Loves_Books 3 days ago
Ok a little farther down, does anybody actually go to a school where someone will  VANDALIZE your car in broad daylight?