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The Player Vs. The Player

The Player Vs. The Player

36.4K Reads 734 Votes 7 Part Story
Kat By BipolarAtTimes Updated Oct 13, 2011

"I loath you," I said, glaring at him. 
"I love you too, " he smirked.  
"Leave her alone. She dosen't want you anymore and you will never lay a hand on her. Ever." 
He looked at me like I was stupid. "I don't want her, I want you." 

Brooke Adams is a player and almost every girl envy her. She is beautiful, smart, experinced. Who doesn't want her? Cal Rodricks is a player and every girl wants him, except her and her new friend, Layla Persley, the ex. Determind, Cal tries to hang out with them and finds every excuse to. She never wants him to break Layla's heart again, but what if it is her heart that breaks and maybe his too..

BipolarAtTimes BipolarAtTimes Oct 18, 2011
@BigNERDYChic :D LOL. I update after 10 votes per chapter :)
Darcy8 Darcy8 Sep 24, 2011
it was perfect :] i like the idea if she doesn't fall in Cal's arms. Make him work and fight and CRY............... just bit
BipolarAtTimes BipolarAtTimes Sep 07, 2011
@omgitslight Haha. Lol. That makes me feel so much better :)
BipolarAtTimes BipolarAtTimes Sep 07, 2011
@I_am_enigma I know what you mean :D Er, I need to fix that. Thanks by the way :D
- - Sep 07, 2011
i like how the characters are very realistic and the plot seems pretty interesting, which makes me want to read more :) voted!
omgitslight omgitslight Sep 07, 2011
I disagree with some of the comments, your characters are realistic and they seem real. Most stories has characters that seems so perfect and that makes it very unrealistic. So what, Brooke has her flaws. She might be bipolar like you, lol. :D