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Why Did He Pick Me || Wattys2017

Why Did He Pick Me || Wattys2017

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Jamesheia By queen_luscious_lips_ Updated 2 days ago

"Bella, what are you thinking about?"

"Why did you do this to me? I'm supposed to resent you, but one minute you're a monster and the next you're taking me cloud nine."

"You were meant to be mine, you know why?"

"Why?" I asked softly.

"Because no one will ever love you more than I will. We can only be separated by death. Do not think I won't know if you cheat on me; you fucking belong to me no matter what. Do you understand?" What started off as soft reassures turned to berated yelling. I nodded quickly, too afraid to do anything else. This side of him scared me.

He grabbed my chin to force me to look at him, "say you belong to me and no fucking body else!" I closed my eyes tight, wishing he'd stop yelling. Val tightened his grip on my face.

"Say it, Jay, or I will hurt you."

"I'm yours and no one else's." I whispered in a low voice, a sob almost breaking my words. Val's eyes softened and he kissed me on my forehead then hugged me tight.

Jay was a normal 18 year old girl. She had a mom, sisters, and best friends. Just like any other girl she had dreams of getting out of her small Mississippi town and live her life. Until a fateful day at school those dreams seemed achievable. Haha, not.

Valentino was ruthless, sadistic, and intelligent, with looks that incited sin. Not to forget a mob boss. But that didn't concern Jay Cosie until she found out her mom sold her to Valentino when she was 14.  Now 4 years later the mob boss came to collect. Jay couldn't stop him, and now she only has one question, can she love her monster or will she hate him forever?

Thank you @ImmortalQueen16 for the cover!

You've repeated this exact detail three times in only two paragraphs
cecebarrett cecebarrett May 12
Biloxi, Mississippi. But I'm bout to moveeeee👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
Salihaaaxx Salihaaaxx Jun 16
I don't see the point the person above is talking about. I think your paragraphs flow pretty well and I don't see anything being repeated. Good work so far, I'm excited to read your story!!!
badgalriribebe badgalriribebe Aug 07, 2016
Right. I have a whole lot of guy friends but never had a boyfriend. They just want to be my home boys and go with skinny girls
Lanisha_long Lanisha_long Jun 28, 2016
I'm not a stereo type and I'm not, not a stereo type... I'm just me XD!
fxck_wit_me_bish fxck_wit_me_bish Jun 23, 2016
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