Lust unleashed. love? Defiantly not.

Lust unleashed. love? Defiantly not.

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Fallen By hate-is-love Updated Mar 19, 2013

I am not good with descibtions soo ya.
I stoped wallking (1st bad decision) and turned around (2nd bad decision). He was literally 3 inches away from me. And for some strange reson. i felt kinda intimitated by the way he towered over me and aura he radiated off was powerful.  Come on Dee pull your self together.

I looked up and said the first thing that came to mind, " Uhm can you like back up. i kinda need some space, you know personal bubble," he came closer to me..

 "seriously dude back up. you  are getting too close. actually you are past to close now is creepy." But he just came closer.. for reals what's wrong with this kid? if e comes any close we could be more than touching. "you know what fine stay close see if i care. you're lucky your breath smells like chocolate"

he just moved closer pushing me with him. i refuse to back away like i am scared. the bell was about to ring and he had back me to a wall. shit i can't let people see this. they will think i did something with him. Uhg he suck "okay okay, if you back off and let me go to class with no sexual actions. I will be your slave for the rest of the week meaning today Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday and Sunday. OK!?" he looked at me intently first then nodded and just left. i know he just left me standing there with no words. then he turned around and said. "o ya you're gonna be late so. better start running."

Oh crap freaking douche i was so deeply into the moment i didn't hear the bell ring and he didn't even bother to tell me.  i ran yelling "Douche bag" at him.

bee kinda kind but please tell me the truth and help me out a little. thnks See YA

  • dominant
  • kissing
  • rated
  • submissive
  • tutor
  • tutoring
qveen-mindless qveen-mindless Jul 12, 2014
That's good ! Stay a virgin girl ! I think you can do it ! But anyways your welcome
qveen-mindless qveen-mindless Jul 11, 2014
My only comment/question is why is a 17 year old girl wearing all hello kitty with a spongebob bookbag? Just wondering
RozalittleDhampir RozalittleDhampir Jul 01, 2012
It's ok, funny but slightly....simplistic. Not really much decription but imma carry on anyways.
hate-is-love hate-is-love Jun 22, 2011
Im sorry but i forget to read and fix it... sorry just imagine the words...
SweetSarita1 SweetSarita1 May 29, 2011
I think capitalization is lacking. But I love the story so far!!!
SweetSarita1 SweetSarita1 May 29, 2011
Intersting so far. Character's funny. I'm on my cell so I might write 2 or 3 other comments. Well, Don't forget to capitalize your I's and try not to use more than 1 period. It thows off the flow.