I am trapped by Talia. She forces me to torture people. But I like it. Or do I? No, no I don't. She likes it. Not me, I can't like it.
its really good, just some spelling errors other then that it was really suspenseful , it was amazing & your such a nice writer. it's really quite interesting. i really liked the opening of this chapter
@Ellakruz Thanks so much. If you read on a bit more, things start to make sense. And actually, I was going for the ever-so-slightly startling description and still make the reader realize that this is a work of writting, not just a story.
Chilling. Very Chilling. I like your cover a lot as well. the actual storyline was a tad confusing- but The descriptions were some sort of shocking Beauty, It was elegant and full of fear at the same time. Interesting topic- You're a very, very nice writer. :]
Np, I just had to say it :]
So NEVER EVER change cover! ;D
Thank you so much for your support! It means the world to me!
Very good. You use the english language very well and your writing techniques are very good. I wish you the best of luck in the Watty Awards 2011, and you certainly have my vote. Keep writing !