This is Death (ON HOLD)

This is Death (ON HOLD)

16.6K Reads 172 Votes 27 Part Story
Loretta (Rhett) I. Emmeline By izsy_me Updated Dec 23, 2011

I am trapped by Talia. She forces me to torture people. But I like it. Or do I? No, no I don't. She likes it. Not me, I can't like it.

- - Jun 08, 2013
its really good, just some spelling errors other then that it was really suspenseful , it was amazing & your such a nice writer. it's really quite interesting. i really liked the opening of this chapter
izsy_me izsy_me Mar 24, 2011
@Ellakruz Thanks so much. If you read on a bit more, things start to make sense. And actually, I was going for the ever-so-slightly startling description and still make the reader realize that this is a work of writting, not just a story.  
Ellakruz Ellakruz Mar 24, 2011
Chilling. Very Chilling. I like your cover a lot as well. the actual storyline was a tad confusing- but The descriptions were some sort of shocking Beauty, It was elegant and full of fear at the same time. Interesting topic- You're a very, very nice writer. :]
pr1nc3ssLucy pr1nc3ssLucy Mar 22, 2011
Np, I just had to say it :]
                              So NEVER EVER change cover! ;D
                              
                              
izsy_me izsy_me Mar 21, 2011
@vampirewritergirl2 
                              Thank you so much for your support! It means the world to me!
vampirewritergirl2 vampirewritergirl2 Mar 05, 2011
Very good. You use the english language very well and your writing techniques are very good. I wish you the best of luck in the Watty Awards 2011, and you certainly have my vote. Keep writing !
                              
                              -- Niamh.