Fix Me, I'm Broken

Fix Me, I'm Broken

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Ana11e1yy By Anna11e1yy Completed

Walking into an empty house is normal to me. I guess I got tired of saying 'I'm home' when nobody is home to reply. 

It wasn't always like this. I remember when our family was close. Now we don't see each other any more. We don't talk to each other. We don't eat with each other. We don't ACKNOWLEDGE each other.

This all happened after my 'Mother' killed herself. My father blames me.

This is my story about how I learned to not count on anyone else but myself. I'm broken. I'm used. No one can fix me.

But when the New Boy in town tries
 to fix me, everything will change. 

Good change or Bad change, I don't know. Only time will tell. 


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Toxic_dess Toxic_dess Jun 26
Oh never mind.  Kenny was four when she was 5. Duh. I'm so dumb.
OnlyHonestReviews OnlyHonestReviews Mar 09, 2015
Under no circumstance ever do this.  There are better ways to introduce the main character. The only reason you would do this is if it was a journal entry. Please don't do this to your readers.
OnlyHonestReviews OnlyHonestReviews Mar 06, 2015
The last few sentences are broken. I'm just nitpicking but other than that its pretty good. (Might want to reveal the gender of the mc though)
directiongirl2010 directiongirl2010 Aug 09, 2014
This is great! It puts the real fealing in a book because shes not perfect.
colourful_mind colourful_mind Jul 28, 2014
This is very strongly engaging and more people should start reading it :)