Everything Wrong With HARRY P...

By Purplemist14

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Note
Part 1: CLICHE Plots
* The Other Potter
* The Other Malfoy
* The Other Marauder
* The 8th Weasley
* Dramione
* Tom Riddle's Only Love
* Voldemort's Daughter
* Crossovers
* The Marauder's Daughter
Part 2: DOs and DON'Ts of Writing Fanfiction
DON'T NO 1: Mary Sues
DON'T NO 2: Unappealing Covers
DON'T NO 3: Out of Character Syndrome
DON'T NO 4: Mature Content
DON'T NO 5: Poor LGBTQ+ Representation
DON'T NO 6: Scarce Research
DON'T NO 7: Poor Character Representation
DON'T NO 8: Feeble Side Cast
DON'T NO 9: Too Many References
DON'T NO 10: Pointless Plot Twists
DON'T NO 11: Saggy Script
DON'T NO 12: Plagiarism
DON'T NO 13: Little To No Description
DON'T NO 14: Cringeworthy Details
DON'T NO 15: Incorrect Representation For Disorders
DON'T NO 16: Deviation
DON'T NO 17: Drama Everywhere
DON'T NO 18: Word For Word Narration
DON'T NO 19: Extremely Long Titles
DON'T NO 20: Romanticizing
DON'T NO 21: Lack Of Realistic Approach
DON'T NO 22: Lack/Excess Of Presentation
DON'T NO 23: Poor Grammar
Part 3: Writing Tips and Techniques
* Writing Styles
* Selecting The Appropriate Narration
* Creating Scenes
* Character Development
* Outlining
* The Antagonist
* Writing From A Guy's Perspective (Part 1)
* Writing From A Guy's Perspective (Part 2)
* Setting Of The Fanfic
Part 4: Dealing With Writer's Block
* Brainstorming
* Collective Suggestions
* Update Schedule
* Music
* Photos/Videos
* Tips That Worked For Me
Part 5: RANdom ThoughtS
Twilight and HP crossover
RomComs
Overlooked Characters
HP Related Art Work
How I Found WP
This Might Be A Bad Idea
Exams i.e The Muggle Azkaban
The Good, The Bad And The News
The Fiction Awards 2018
Another Crossover Idea
A Werewolf Theory
The Wait Is Finally Over
Neverland Crossover
Lupus Conjectura (Coming Soon)
Stay Motivated
The First Fanfic I Wrote
The Secret To The Chamber's Exit
Idea For A Fantasy Novel
Maybe I'll Rewrite
Fan Cast
Author's Note (June 24, 2018)
Spread Positivity (Tag)
Queries Regarding The Review Section
The Fiction Awards Voting
Special Announcement
Jily Tribute
Open For Reviews
The Tattooist Of Azkaban
If I Could Turn Back Time...
Part 6: Reviews Of Fanfics
REVIEW NO 1
REVIEW NO 2
REVIEW NO 3
REVIEW NO 4
REVIEW NO 5
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Part 7: Legendary Writing Tips
* Write What You Know
* Write What You Want To Read

REVIEW NO 8

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By Purplemist14

The book we are going to review today is All Your Little Quirks by sarsasstic

Now first these are the basics.

Book Name: All Your Little Quirks

Author's account name: 

Main Characters: Arven Hassan, Helena Ravenclaw.

Description:

love isn't easy, is what they all say.

arven, however, knows it better than anyone else.

for he slowly falls for a beautiful, quirky girl with black hair and an obsession with the colour blue - a girl who also happens to be a witch.

unfortunately for him, witch hunting is a commonly practised sport in his village.

Chapter Count: 12 and complete.

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Now let's get on with the review!

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1. The Title:

The title fits the story beautifully. Since this is a fanfic on Helena Ravenclaw, I don't think there could be a better choice for the title as this one.

2. The Cover:

I simply love the cover. The way the blue dress makes such a wonderful contrast with the green forest, the way the font overlaps in the title is just perfect.

3. Concept:

The story is based on Arven Hassan, an Albanian who can't speak, and on Helena Ravenclaw whom he meets when she is hiding away from her mother in the forest near his village.

4. Review (includes Summary too):

The story starts with an introduction to Arven and his life. Arven does not have the ability to speak and thus faces bullying. As the story is set in the times when witchcraft was executionable, Arven himself has faced tough questions when people suspected even a harmless person like him of witchcraft.

Arven leaves his home after the sun sets to go to the forest where he can finally be free from the judging stares and cruel whispers. And one day on his trip to the forest, he met Helena Ravenclaw.

What I think:

The writing style in which this fanfic is written is poetic as well as utterly amazing. Even though it is difficult to portray such a character as Arven, the author has succeeded in conveying his character to the readers by poignant descriptions and beautiful portrayal of emotions.

Helena Ravenclaw is done justice and is shown in such a different yet positive light that it makes the reader want to read more and more of her. The way her personality and her behavior is depicted is beyond compelling and I must say this was one of the best fanfics I have ever come across on Wattpad.

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If you are looking for a story on Helena Ravenclaw and also want a heart wrenching tragedy then this is the book for you.

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 I seriously don't have any words for your writing. I was completely blown away by the story and yesterday when I was reading it, I was so bent on finishing it due to the charm you have woven in the fanfic that it made me feel terrible when I had to leave the story in the middle as I had to go to academy for classes.

Your portrayal of both Helena and Arven is worth applauding and there were absolutely no errors in the fanfic. Especially the ending... How can you write so perfectly?

Looking forward to reading more of your books because so far I have read two and they have me hooked to read more. Best of luck and keep writing in this brilliant style you have.

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