Everything Wrong With HARRY P...

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Note
Part 1: CLICHE Plots
* The Other Potter
* The Other Malfoy
* The Other Marauder
* The 8th Weasley
* Dramione
* Tom Riddle's Only Love
* Voldemort's Daughter
* Crossovers
* The Marauder's Daughter
Part 2: DOs and DON'Ts of Writing Fanfiction
DON'T NO 1: Mary Sues
DON'T NO 2: Unappealing Covers
DON'T NO 3: Out of Character Syndrome
DON'T NO 4: Mature Content
DON'T NO 5: Poor LGBTQ+ Representation
DON'T NO 6: Scarce Research
DON'T NO 7: Poor Character Representation
DON'T NO 8: Feeble Side Cast
DON'T NO 9: Too Many References
DON'T NO 10: Pointless Plot Twists
DON'T NO 11: Saggy Script
DON'T NO 12: Plagiarism
DON'T NO 13: Little To No Description
DON'T NO 14: Cringeworthy Details
DON'T NO 15: Incorrect Representation For Disorders
DON'T NO 16: Deviation
DON'T NO 17: Drama Everywhere
DON'T NO 18: Word For Word Narration
DON'T NO 19: Extremely Long Titles
DON'T NO 20: Romanticizing
DON'T NO 21: Lack Of Realistic Approach
DON'T NO 23: Poor Grammar
Part 3: Writing Tips and Techniques
* Writing Styles
* Selecting The Appropriate Narration
* Creating Scenes
* Character Development
* Outlining
* The Antagonist
* Writing From A Guy's Perspective (Part 1)
* Writing From A Guy's Perspective (Part 2)
* Setting Of The Fanfic
Part 4: Dealing With Writer's Block
* Brainstorming
* Collective Suggestions
* Update Schedule
* Music
* Photos/Videos
* Tips That Worked For Me
Part 5: RANdom ThoughtS
Twilight and HP crossover
RomComs
Overlooked Characters
HP Related Art Work
How I Found WP
This Might Be A Bad Idea
Exams i.e The Muggle Azkaban
The Good, The Bad And The News
The Fiction Awards 2018
Another Crossover Idea
A Werewolf Theory
The Wait Is Finally Over
Neverland Crossover
Lupus Conjectura (Coming Soon)
Stay Motivated
The First Fanfic I Wrote
The Secret To The Chamber's Exit
Idea For A Fantasy Novel
Maybe I'll Rewrite
Fan Cast
Author's Note (June 24, 2018)
Spread Positivity (Tag)
Queries Regarding The Review Section
The Fiction Awards Voting
Special Announcement
Jily Tribute
Open For Reviews
The Tattooist Of Azkaban
If I Could Turn Back Time...
Part 6: Reviews Of Fanfics
REVIEW NO 1
REVIEW NO 2
REVIEW NO 3
REVIEW NO 4
REVIEW NO 5
REVIEW NO 6
REVIEW NO 7
REVIEW NO 8
REVIEW NO 9
REVIEW NO 10
REVIEW NO 11
REVIEW NO 12
REVIEW NO 13
REVIEW NO 14
REVIEW NO 15
REVIEW NO 16
REVIEW NO 17
REVIEW NO 18
REVIEW NO 19
REVIEW NO 20
REVIEW NO 21
REVIEW NO 22
REVIEW NO 23
REVIEW NO 24
REVIEW NO 25
REVIEW NO 26
REVIEW NO 27
REVIEW NO 28
REVIEW NO 29
REVIEW NO 30
REVIEW NO 31
REVIEW NO 32
REVIEW NO 33
REVIEW NO 34
Part 7: Legendary Writing Tips
* Write What You Know
* Write What You Want To Read

DON'T NO 22: Lack/Excess Of Presentation

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Por Purplemist14

You're all familiar with the importance of presentation.

Whether it be story writing or project making, the most important aspect which makes your work stand out from the rest is the way it is presented.

If your presentation is great and unique, people are more likely to check out and keep reading your story.

But what exactly is meant by a good presentation?

Today, in this chapter, we're going to discuss about presentation in fanfics and how to accurately do it.

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The main things that are covered in presentation are letter spacing, line spacing, paragraph changes, chapter dividers and then some are optional aspects such as banners, ribbons, page dividers etc etc.

It is a well known fact that lack or excess of anything is bad. The first case we are going to discuss is the lack of presentation.

Case 1:

If a story has lack of presentation it means that the whole format is kept extremely simple. There are no paragraphs, no gaps, no line spacing and obviously it looks as if a lot of words are just cramped together.

The way it looks is something like this:

[Never mind where this piece of writing is from. And if the actual writer of this comes across it here, then I'm sorry I just found this on the internet and included it only for the outlook it gives not the content].

Not only does it seem crowded but also makes it difficult for the reader to read and process everything. Long paragraphs make readers freak out most of the time. It happens to me too. Remember that if your story is easy on the eyes, then obviously you are more likely to get your readers to read everything in it. And it it has lack of spaces among the text, there's a 75% chance that the reader will just leave your story no matter how great the content is.

For example, let's suppose you made a vegetable salad but instead of arranging the vegetables you just put them in a bowl and mix and mash them altogether such that the salad looks more like a gooey paste.

Would you expect anyone to eat it then? No.

It is quite similar to what you write. If there are good spaces such as appropriate length paragraphs of like five to seven lines on laptop/computer (you can have 10 to 13 lines if you're typing on the smartphone), a separate paragraph for each speaker so the reader doesn't get confused among the dialogues etc, then you're doing a great job.

A good piece of writing should look like this:

Note how the paragraphs are divided and it also seems easier to read. The spaces give a nice and easy outlook to it. But that's just one thing from lack of presentation that we have discussed. Other errors that may interfere with presentation are punctuation and capitalizing.

Do not write in all caps or none. Make sure the first alphabet of each of your sentences is capitalized, the pronouns and names of places etc are also capitalized. If there is a good balance of uppercase and lowercase letter it looks fine. If not, then you should go and immediately revise it.

Unless you're writing a random book.

Random books don't have as many rules since they are rants, opinions, advises etc. It would be great to write with presentation in there as well but if you don't, it doesn't matter.

Case 2:

If your writing has too much of everything then it isn't considered okay either. For example having too much spaces between text and dialogue that the reader completely forgets what was happening, too many emojis/banners/symbols etc also make it seem cramped.

An excessively presented layout is like a pasta with too much ketchup on it. So try avoiding it. 

This is okay as long as it is just a tweet. But if you use emojis like that in writing, then I advise you to go and remove it.

Also, you don't really have to italicize everything or write many words in bold to capture reader's attention. Just do it when you really have to such as when you're stressing on a word in a dialogue or mentioning a news article or something that needs to be highlighted to separate it from the narrative text.

Banners are good for starting a book or a chapter. Some authors I know at Wattpad work hard on making the perfect banners for their stories. I understand that it's very dear to you people because it's like your signature on a book. But remember don't overdo it.

I place a banner having my name and a little intro at the beginning of the book as an opening and also place it at the end as a closure. Having one banner for each chapter is okay too I guess.

But if there's a banner screaming Cliffhanger! and #OTP! popping in throughout the story (or just notes the author wanted to add) then it won't do for me or for some other readers as well.

Keep your banner simple with one background, one image and some text.

Then some of you have page dividers that look like this:

Just use them with caution. I know they look nice and all but if there are too many, it would seem more like a wedding invitation than an actual book. You can use them for where chapters end or to divide scenes. Just don't use too many (like more than eight) in one chapter.

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I guess that's all I have to say on presentation.

Hope this was helpful.

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