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Part 1: CLICHE Plots
* The Other Potter
* The Other Malfoy
* The Other Marauder
* The 8th Weasley
* Dramione
* Tom Riddle's Only Love
* Voldemort's Daughter
* Crossovers
* The Marauder's Daughter
Part 2: DOs and DON'Ts of Writing Fanfiction
DON'T NO 1: Mary Sues
DON'T NO 2: Unappealing Covers
DON'T NO 3: Out of Character Syndrome
DON'T NO 4: Mature Content
DON'T NO 5: Poor LGBTQ+ Representation
DON'T NO 6: Scarce Research
DON'T NO 8: Feeble Side Cast
DON'T NO 9: Too Many References
DON'T NO 10: Pointless Plot Twists
DON'T NO 11: Saggy Script
DON'T NO 12: Plagiarism
DON'T NO 13: Little To No Description
DON'T NO 14: Cringeworthy Details
DON'T NO 15: Incorrect Representation For Disorders
DON'T NO 16: Deviation
DON'T NO 17: Drama Everywhere
DON'T NO 18: Word For Word Narration
DON'T NO 19: Extremely Long Titles
DON'T NO 20: Romanticizing
DON'T NO 21: Lack Of Realistic Approach
DON'T NO 22: Lack/Excess Of Presentation
DON'T NO 23: Poor Grammar
Part 3: Writing Tips and Techniques
* Writing Styles
* Selecting The Appropriate Narration
* Creating Scenes
* Character Development
* Outlining
* The Antagonist
* Writing From A Guy's Perspective (Part 1)
* Writing From A Guy's Perspective (Part 2)
* Setting Of The Fanfic
Part 4: Dealing With Writer's Block
* Brainstorming
* Collective Suggestions
* Update Schedule
* Music
* Photos/Videos
* Tips That Worked For Me
Part 5: RANdom ThoughtS
Twilight and HP crossover
RomComs
Overlooked Characters
HP Related Art Work
How I Found WP
This Might Be A Bad Idea
Exams i.e The Muggle Azkaban
The Good, The Bad And The News
The Fiction Awards 2018
Another Crossover Idea
A Werewolf Theory
The Wait Is Finally Over
Neverland Crossover
Lupus Conjectura (Coming Soon)
Stay Motivated
The First Fanfic I Wrote
The Secret To The Chamber's Exit
Idea For A Fantasy Novel
Maybe I'll Rewrite
Fan Cast
Author's Note (June 24, 2018)
Spread Positivity (Tag)
Queries Regarding The Review Section
The Fiction Awards Voting
Special Announcement
Jily Tribute
Open For Reviews
The Tattooist Of Azkaban
If I Could Turn Back Time...
Part 6: Reviews Of Fanfics
REVIEW NO 1
REVIEW NO 2
REVIEW NO 3
REVIEW NO 4
REVIEW NO 5
REVIEW NO 6
REVIEW NO 7
REVIEW NO 8
REVIEW NO 9
REVIEW NO 10
REVIEW NO 11
REVIEW NO 12
REVIEW NO 13
REVIEW NO 14
REVIEW NO 15
REVIEW NO 16
REVIEW NO 17
REVIEW NO 18
REVIEW NO 19
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REVIEW NO 25
REVIEW NO 26
REVIEW NO 27
REVIEW NO 28
REVIEW NO 29
REVIEW NO 30
REVIEW NO 31
REVIEW NO 32
REVIEW NO 33
REVIEW NO 34
Part 7: Legendary Writing Tips
* Write What You Know
* Write What You Want To Read

DON'T NO 7: Poor Character Representation

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Now this is quite similar to DON'T NO 5: LGBTQ+ Representation.

But I have to include this because it covers a great deal of other topics as well. And trust me, it is H-U-G-E.

It is great that young authors nowadays want to bring diversity into their stories and also make it an acceptable read for all kinds of audience. And that is exactly why they include a lot of characters trying to represent people from normal everyday lives and making a certain story relatable to all.

But then, some succeed in this diverse portrayal while some are faced with epic fails.

Like I discussed earlier, stereotypes do exist but including too many of them doesn't make your work diverse whatsoever. But that doesn't mean you have to forget about them altogether. I just meant that don't include too much of them. We have all had enough of the tattooed bad boy and the nerd with glasses (or maybe I'm the only one who thinks that).

It's kinda understandable why people refer to stereotypes for guidelines, because I know it is difficult to write about something you have no affiliation with but there are a few tips to follow if you plan on writing in such a way.

POC Representation:

POC representation is the best thing to ever happen to the literary world. People who are not European and not white are also getting stories about them being published and it is downright a good thing.

But the problem seeps in when it comes to their representation in books/movies/fanfics etc.

I am stating a few points which you should take care of when writing a POC character.

1. Arab characters:

Not all Arabs are barbarians who live in the deserts and ride camels.

Arabs are not backward.

Not all of them are sexist misogynists.

Not all of them are strongly prejudiced against freedom and women rights.

If your character is an Arab and studies at Hogwarts or teaches there, then he/she isn't necessarily going to be socially backward or conservative.

2. Hispanic Characters:

Hispanics/Latin people constitute one of the biggest minorities in America. And as such they are often used as side characters (sometimes as main roles) in fiction/fanfiction.

But they are always portrayed in the same way.

Male Latinos seldom exist while the female Latinas are considered as erotic sensual vamps who work as bar maids or strippers. Or if we are talking about HP fanfiction, they can get their role in the form of a super hot yet crazy ex-girlfriend of some main character who exists only because she has to wreak havoc in his life as well as whoever OC he is in love with.

Point to be noted... Not all of them are like that.

This is not a cookie cutter generation where each person from a specific race/country/religion is going to be an exact replica of one another.

3. Native Americans:

Only one tiny misunderstanding to clear:

THIS IS 2018, HOW CAN NATIVE AMERICANS STILL BE WAR LIKE JUNGLE PEOPLE WHO WEAR WAR PAINT ALL THE TIME AND DO NOT KNOW HOW TO COMMUNICATE?

And they do not hunt for food like they used to previously. They, just like you, can go to a dine out restaurant if food's not cooked at home.

4. Asian Representation (Far East):

People portray all the far east characters as one personality.

The females are usually dragon ladies or make up girls while the males are techies, geeks, nerds and all that kind of stuff.

Moreover, authors think (read: believe) that everyone from China/Japan would be a Samurai/Martial Arts combatant (Bruce Lee 2.0 in short).

And they also have his conception that everyone from Korea would be a make up obsessed teen working wonders with foundation and mascara.

Well the truth is... No.

There are a lot of people from China/Japan/Korea who aren't martial nor make up artists.

There are a lot of people in these countries who do not have a passion for technology.

They do not look exactly the same and they are NOT EXACTLY THE SAME.

[Speaking from personal experience: I have met a lot of Japanese people on an educational trip to Japan and let me tell you, they are all really different from one another. Also, Japan is a beautiful country with equally beautiful people and if there's one place you should visit for vacations, it should be Japan].

5. Asian Representation (South Asia):

Now this is the most conflicted of representations as far as I know. There are about 8 countries in this region and each is entirely different from the other. Just because Shruti and Sania look somewhat alike, doesn't mean that they will be alike in nature too.

The main countries people use when writing (which is quite rare) are India, Pakistan, Bangladesh, Maldives.

Honestly, these aren't the only countries to choose from.

Take Sri Lanka for example. The people there are beautiful and their culture is rich and unique but in fiction they literally don't have a say in the matter.

Then comes the IndoPak region.

Not all Pakistanis are terrorists or mafia people associated with terrorist groups or something.

Not all of them are ammunition suppliers.

Stop portraying them as the villains in stories.

Pakistanis are not a backward nation who have no idea to stand up for their rights.

And just because it is a Nuclear State doesn't mean it will wage war on the world tomorrow.

Also, not all Indians are racist.

Not all of them are extremely religion abiding.

Not all of them are vegans.

Indians are educated people who know about technology and aren't as backward as it is made out to be.

Same goes for every other country in this region.

SOUTH ASIANS ARE NOT TERRORISTS. STOP CATEGORIZING THEM AS SUCH.

[I guess this one got a little bit too personal and emotionally wrecking for me to write. Also, I know this isn't exactly HP fanfiction related but... It's good to have a general outlook once in a while].

6. African Americans:

There's a lot of misconception when it comes to African Americans.

I mean why don't we all get practical and accept that they are humans too?

There are quite a rare and specific number of roles singled out for these characters.

True, the author would state that we depicted him/her in a positive way as a witty, sassy, headstrong person who knows how to get his/her way and blah blah blah.

Then there is the stereotype known as the Magical Negro. In this stereotype the African American is some magic associated man/woman who works for the benefit of others literally keeping nothing for themselves.

Or the other Stereotype used is the POC best friend. This one best friend, usually an African American, merely exists in the books to help the protagonist in order to survive. And the protagonist is a white female, nearly always.

The best friend takes all his/her hits and blows, is portrayed as the epitome of loyalty and such and yet can not do anything against the will of her white best friend.

I know this sisn't a book related to TVD fandom, but I'm giving an example from the Vampire Diaries TV Shows here. Take Bonnie Bennett as an example. Portrayed by Kat Graham, Bonnie is a character many people relate to and admire but has anyone really thought deeply into the whole foundation of this character?

Take a look at the above stereotypes and you will understand that Bonnie Bennett is based off both the Magical Negro and Best friend stereotype.

She is Elena's witch friend who helps her out of any crises she's thrown into and does not retaliate to Elena even when she's being crappy to her just because, don't you see, she's such a good friend!

***

The above stereotypes and representations I used as an example, are according to what is shown on TV and movies. Since I don't have a lot of time to indulge in extensive reading these days to elaborate this chapter with literary examples. But I'm sure a lot of our friends will definitely elaborate it in the comments.

If you're writing a fanfic with a POC character in it, base him/her off very carefully and mold the character just like you do so with other characters.

And like I discussed earlier, give your characters contrasting tastes.

You can have an Arab character who sings and is extremely fond of music.

You can have a Latina woman who is a virgin, who is a lot reserved, reads books and does not really enjoy people's company.

You can have a Far Eastern character who is not too fond of makeup/martial arts.

You can do a lot of things to your characters. And it's totally up to you to decide how to best represent them. Cross question your friends, observe the people around you, read up on helpful blogs at the internet. You will realize that basing your characters off real people is not only interesting but also rewarding.

***

Enough of the rambling for now. I've noticed that I tend to get pretty emotional when writing on topics as these.

Anyhow, I hope this chapter helped.

See you soon with the next update.

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