Maddamsir: And I Don't Want T...

By overthinking019

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Two souls have everything in their 40s, but not love.. More

Characterization
Prologue
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
Part 33
Part 34
Part 35
Part 36
Part 37
Part 38
Part 39
Part 40
Part 41
Part 42
Part 43
Part 44
Part 45
Part 46
Part 47
Part 48
Part 49
Part 50
Part 51
Part 52
Part 53
Part 54
Part 55
Part 56
Part 57
Part 58
Part 59
Part 60
Part 61
Part 62
Part 63
Part 64
Part 65
Part 66
Part 67
Part 68
Part 69
Part 70
Part 71
Part 72
Part 73
Part 74
Part 75
Part 76
Part 77
Part 78
Part 79
Part 80
Part 81
Part 82
Part 83
Part 84
Part 85
Part 86
Part 87
Part 88
Last Part 89

Part 6

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Sunray disturbed the sleep of Haseena, she open her eyes, & look her gang, who is in deep slumber of sugary sleep, & her eye catch Karishma & Santu, who running around the café, & she coming out from the café with yawing, while she says- good morning..

Santu says with irks tone- oh, ho, itni alas bhari morning wish mai afford nahi kar sakti..

Haseena says with pouted tone- subhe, subhe insan ko na hass kar morning wish karna chahiye, khud ke liye na sahi, lekin dusron ka din accha jaata hai..

Karishma says with naughty casual tone- lekin samne wala itne alas bhari awaz mei wish kar raha ho toh kya karna chahiye..

"muh dhookar wish karna chahiye" Haseena, Karishma, & Santu looks to Cheetah, who cleaning his mouth with the water, while the same time, splash the water on Rajvir's face..

Rajvir getting up from his sleep with shouting, "jaan, badh aagayi, bacchi ko lekar chalo, jaldi, jaldi"

Same time Mira hit on his arm, who holding her hair in his fist, while getting up from the sudden sleep, he open his eyes, & look around, & found Mira with anger, & he left her hair & mimes, 'sorry' to her..

Everyone laughs on them, while Mira says- good morning guys..

Everyone wish her back, while Billu comes to them with the tray, & says- sab ki mann pasndita coffee..

Karishma shouts by Billu's name- aye Billa..

Billu look her & asked- boliye..

Karishma says with little irks tone- sab ke liye jalim coffee lekar aana, warna, kisika bhi dimag thikane par nahi aayega..

Billu look to Karishma & asked- kya matlab hai aapka..

Karishma look him with stern face, & says- hum hi lekar aate hai, waise bhi tumhe toh nahi samjh aayega, & she walks towards the café kitchen area..

While Santu says- mai bhi aa rahi hun, & she walks behind her..

Mira look to Haseena with lips down & says- humein toh koi puchta bhi nahi hai..

Haseena says while give side hugged to Mira & says- aa jaa mera baccha..

In kitchen:

"kya baat hai, abhi toh baata sakti ho" Karishma asked to Santu..

Santu look to Karishma & says with casual tone- arye baba kuch bhi baat nahi hai..

Karishma look to Santu & asked- toh phir kal raat ko, tumhari aur Cheetah ki aankhon mei jo ek dukh ki kinar dikhi usska kya..

Santu says with little irks- aisa kuch bhi nahi hai, bas, thodi thakan thi aur kuch nahi..

Karishma says with stern face- ab humse jhoot bologi..

Santu close her eyes & says while turn herself to other side- baat mere aur Cheetah ke beech ki hai..

Karishma hold Santu's arm, & turn her to herself & asked- yahi baat humare muh par bolo..

Santu open her eyes with helpless face, & she goes to open her mouth, but Mira & Cheetah's voice break their conversation, & Karishma says- Haseena ko bhi pata chala hai, kal unnhone bhi tumhe aur Cheetah ko waise dekha hai, toh prepare raho, hum toh chod rahe hai, woh nahi chodegi, jab tak baat ka pata nahi chalta hai, thik hai, & she pick the tray of coffee mugs & left the kitchen, Santu close her eyes with upset layer..

Everyone goes pick the coffee mugs from the tray while Karishma says- abye woh mat uthao..

Rajvir asked with confusion- kiu, issmei kya jaher daalkar layi ho..

Karishma says with casual tone- haan, aur aisa waisa jaher nahi hai, zalim jaher hai..

Haseena quickly hit on Karishma's arm & says- chup kariye, kuch bhi bole jaa rahi hai, Rajkumari jaher daalkar nahi laayi hai, bas woh humari coffee hogi, iss liye aisa bol rahi hai..

Cheetah asked with doubtful tone- akhirkar kya baat hai iss coffee mei..

Haseena goes to open her mouth & same time Karishma says- 2 chamach coffee aur sirf garam pani aur kuch bhi nahi..

Santu, Cheetah, Mira, & Rajvir made her face weird one, & Cheetah says- arey baap re! jaher se kum nahi hai..

Haseena shook her head with sip & asked- ab yaha se kaha par jaana hai..

Cheetah quickly says- yaha se sidha hotel jaana hai, usske baad kahi par bhi jaayenge..

Mira quickly says- ek minute, tum sab toh hotel jaaoge, lekin humara kya..

Karishma asked with casual tone- tumhara kya, tum tumhare hotel jaaogi..

Mira look to Karishma then look to Rajvir, who gulping his coffee with the upset layer, Mira says- iss insan ne hotel hi book nahi kiya hai, aur isski wajah se ab humein koi hotel mei room hi nahi mil raha hai..

Santu says with causal tone- arye issmei konsi badi baat hai, tumhe room mil gaya samjho..

Rajvir & Mira asked together- kaise..

Santu quickly says- Karishma aur Haseena akeli aayi hai, aur woh doono ek room share karlegi, tum doono, inn doono mei se kisi ka room le lo na..

Karishma & Haseena exchange the look with shock, while Karishma says- hum kuch karte hai, hum arrange kar lenge, ruko thodi der..

Haseena says with clam tone- Karishma chutthioyan ka season hai, koi bhi hotel aapko nahi milega iss waqt, baat ko samjhiye..

Karishma look to Haseena with anger, while she says with soft tone- hum ek baar koshish toh karte hai..

Haseena shook her head & gets busy with coffee..

Past:

"hum Haseena ke saath humara tent nahi share karne wale hai" Karishma says with anger..

"kiu" Haseena asked with confusion tone..

"kiu ka kya matlab hai, yeh ladki raat ko nind mei badbad karti hai, aur humein raat ko chain ki nind chahiye hoti hai" Karishma says..

Haseena goes to open her mouth, but Santu says- dekho, mai pehle hi bol deti hun, mujhe Mira ke saath tent share karna hai, aur Cheetah, Rajvir ek tent share karne wale hai, aur baki rahe hai, 3 tent toh ussmei se ek tum doono ka hai, lekin partner hum sab ko irritate karne wale hai, toh soch samjhkar bolna..

Haseena says with irks tone- aur humein, unn mei se kisi ke saath bhi tent nahi share karna hai..

Karishma says with irks tone- toh phir thik hai, aap koi aur tent lekar aayiye yaa phir tent ke bahar hi raat gujariye, lekin humare saath aap nahi rehgi..

Rajvir irrupt in between with excited irk tone- arye meri chipakaliyon..

Haseean says with irks tone- tu chipakali bolna band kar, haan..

Rajvir shows his both hands & says- mere paas ek upaya hai..

Karishma asked with irks tone- kya hai..

Rajvir look Karishma with puppy eyes & says- pyar se pucho na..

Karishma hold her one leg & says- amma oh jaada muh khola na, toh phod dege..

Cheetah circle his hand around Rajvir's shoulder & whisper near to his ear- jaada bolo mat, bhook lagi hai, kaccha chaba jaayegi, jo kuch bhi idea hai, bak de, aur side ho jaa..

Haseena try to listen them & asked- kya khusur, phusur kar rahe ho..

Cheetah quickly give answer to Haseena- kuch nahi, kiu Raj bhai..

Rajvir agree with him & says- haan, yeh bilkul sahi bol raha hai, waise rooi hai mere paas, usse kaan mei daalkar soo sakte ho, & he forward the cotton to Karishma..

Karishma take the cotton in her hand & asked- amma iss rooi ko kiu lekar aaye ho, aur tum isske saath kya karne wale the..

Rajvir asked with forceful smile- tumhara kaam ho gaya, ab toh tum Haseena ke saath tent share karogi..

Karishma says with little attitude- kar lege, & she entered into the tent with her bag, & Haseena too walks behide Karishma with her bag..

Haseena asked with irks tone- itne nakhre kiu kar rahi thi, aur hum doono humesha tent share karte aaye hai, pata hai na, phir bhi bahar yeh sab nakhre kar rahi thi..

Karishma says with soft tone- hum iss liye nakhre kar rahe the, kiu aaj humari date hai..

Haseena asked with doubtful tone- kis ke saath..

Karishma says with smile & proud tone- Amirta Pritam ji ke saath, koi shaq..

Haseena twisting her lips & says- kya baat hai, waise kya humein bhi shamil karegi..

Karishma think for a moment & says- shayad nahi..

Haseena asked with shock- kiu, & same time Haseena's cell rings..

Karishma says with smooth smile- isski wajah se, & Haseena look her cell, & found out the name flashing of her fiancé..

Karishma says with smile- jaayiye, utha lijiye, kiu intzaar karwa rahi hai..

Haseena smile & she pick the call & left the tent, while Karishma says with herself in soft tone- issi liye humein aapke saath nahi rehna hai, dooriyaan banake rekhna chahte hai, waise bhi naye rishton mei humein bhoolti jaa rahi hai, aur aapko khud ko samjh nahi aa raha hai..

Past End..

Karishma says with little irks tone- isski maayain ki saasu maayain, poore Shimla mei ek bhi room available nahi hai..

Santu says with polite tone- bola tha na maine, aur waise bhi tum doono ek dusre ke saath humesha kamra share karti aayi ho, toh aaj kya baat hai..

Haseena says with clam tone- arye koi bhi baat nahi hai, lekin abhi hum sab college student thodi na hai..

Mira says with clam- it's ok, hum kuch karlenge mange, kiu Rajvir..

Rajvir says with smile- haan jaan..

Karishma think for a moment & says- nahi, kuch mange karne ki jarurat nahi hai, tum doono chalo, hum check out karte hai, aur humara saman Haseena ke saath shift karte hai..

Haseena look to Karishma with shock face, Karishma look Haseena & asked- aapko koi aitraz hai..

Haseena quickly says with clam tone- nahi, koi, koi bhi aitraz nahi hai..

Karishma shook her head & Mira says- thik hai, toh phir pehle Karishma ke hotel jaata hai, aur baad mei Haseena ke, thik hai..

Haseena & Karishma shook their head, while Haseena in mind- chalo, kuch toh baat acchi huyi, bas ab baat karne ki himmat dena khuda, & she look Karishma, who walking with Cheetah & Santu, & she joins Mira & Rajvir..

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