Pyar Ki Love Story | Short Stories | 1st Book |

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Tumhare uss sheher mein raat jaldi ho jati Hai

Mere iss sheher ka Suraj jaldi haar nahi man-ta

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By night Jannat's health got worse, she catched fever also and some red spot appears on her skin.

"It's definitely allergy, maybe she ate something she is allergic to," dr. Said as he examine the rashes on Jannat's hands,

"What did you ate?" Once Dr. Left, Zaid asked Jannat

"Um.... Mashroom," Zaid was looking at her medicine when she answered

"Mashroom?.... Oh..... Why did you drunk the soup when you know you are allergic to mashroom?" Zaid realized that in morning he ordered mashroom soup for her,

Jannat just looked at him flushed. All he did was give her stern look

"Next time you'll tell me,....." He took ointment to apply on her hand

"I'll apply it myself." When he grabbed her hand, she pulled them away.

"Main Kar raha Hoon na," he again hold her hand, carefully he applied ointment on her hands,

(I'll apply it,)

He scoot closer to her a little to apply it on her face, her breath hitched as she close her eyes tightly feeling his touch.

Her hot breath were falling on his face his finger trace down to her neck. Her swan like neck still looked appealing. He gulped making her open her eyes and found him looking at her neck while applying ointment there.

They are married for weeks and are sleeping together on same bed, but she never once looked at his direction and now when so suddenly he is close to her, she could feel her heart pound.

She couldn't help but notice how handsome he looked from close.

When he was done he raised his head and found her already looking at him.

Feeling embarrassed from getting cought, she quickly turned other side.

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"Hey!" Palwasha sat beside Mohid who seems to enjoy the evening in park,

Mohid turned to her and smiled again looked in front of him

"So.... You come here everyday?" Palwasha also looked in front of her, thinking what's keeping him interested there.

"Actually..... Sometime," he looked at her who was looking in front of her, sun was setting down but not before leaving it's gleam on her face making it glow.

"Oh! I come here everyday." Hearing him talk she turned to him, he didn't asked but she told him

"That's nice," he again looked at view. Palwasha didn't took her eyes away from him and observe him

She couldn't help but compare him with Zaid

He had facial hair but not full like Zaid,

His skin was light unlike Zaid's tan,he was also little taller than Zaid.....

Feeling her eyes on him he looked at her and raised his eyebrow

She shook her head negatively and looked down,

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Next morning*

"Snow fall!" Jannat exclaimed when she saw tiny crystal ball of ice. Getting down from bed she went to balcony glass door and started looking at it.

She has only listen about it, or saw it in movies. Now first time seeing it

The small ball of ice was looking more beautiful in real, she wonder how would it'll feel on her palm,

"Do you want to go on balcony?" Zaid who was observing her, went to behind her and asked

"Can I?" She turned to him and again looked at snow fall

"One minute," he picked her shawl from wardrobe and wrapped it around her, she was already wearing sweatshirt and a jacket, because Zaid strictly told her to. she thought she didn't need it. But didn't said anything thinking he'll then refuse her to go on balcony

Holding her hand in his he lead her to balcony, the roof on the top was protecting them, forbidding snow to fall on them.

Jannat took her hand forward to catch it, some balls fall on her palm. She then took her hand and looked at the melting snow so interestingly

A smile on her face that he is first time witnessing. Making his heart flutter

He looked at the snow falling and thought it is really that interesting to brought a smile on her face? He has saw snow fall many times and never really liked them. He hate winters.

His phone ranged making him come to his trace, he attended the call and went inside to talk,

It was the client whom he was supposed to have meeting today but Zaid cancelled it because of Jannat's health he didn't wanted to leave her alone

After talking to the client he again took his steps to balcony but stopped for a moment, not just his steps but his heart also. when he saw Jannat trying to get snow while she was holding railing with her one hand and her feet taking another step forward.

"Jannat!" He quickly went to her and hold her from her elbow making her scared

"Kya Kar rahi ho?" He raised his voice making her jumped a little

(What are you doing?)

"Woh..... I......." she said trying to get her hand free from him

(Actually...)

"Dhyaan kaha Hai tumhara? Itna qareeb khada hota Hai koi railing ke?" He scold her not knowing she is already scared by his stern voice

(What? Why did you stand so close from railing?)

"I'm...... I'm sorry," she looked down, hiding the tears in her eyes. No one ever raised their voice at her

Her brittle voice made him realized that he scared her,

"You should be careful, balcony floor gets slippery in these weather," he loose his grip and calmly told her.

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Anyway I have received two questions in my dm, although I have answered it but it made me think maybe you guys also think something like that...

First question was: why your chapters have less description

Because I don't like long description where author even explain the daag on wall and something, the color of tiles, sofa. How the table was placed and all

They exhaust me as a reader, that sometimes I skip it and read dialogues only

Thing which I don't like reading as a reader so I don't write to. Simple

And beside I don't know how to write that 😬

Second: why you never describe your character, like how they look and all

Well this thing doesn't have to do with the first one, I don't sketch character because I don't want to give any definition of beauty,

If I say the character is beautiful and they look like this, this and this. So this will give definition that khoobsurati yahi Hai bas, Baki sab kuch nahi

Everyone have different kind of definition of beauty in their mind and I want them to think the characters as if they want.

Hope you don't want mind me getting off topic

Anyway tell me how was the chapter

-Ufaq