so ive been trying to improve metaphors a lot by making the plot less cringe and a little more believable so i need your opinion
do you think i should get rid of the shadow knight subplot for metaphors to make it less cringe or?? idk is it too iconic or should i scrap it???
im kind of leaning towards a bIG rewrite, and i need a QUICK opinion because i can't publish the next chapter until i have an opinion on this shadow knight thing bc id have to change the chapter quite a bit
if i do decide to scrap the subplot, it would take quite a while since there are some chapters solely based around it, and id probably have to unpublish most of the book, but i want metaphors to be better and more like a real book you might buy
so i don't know, what do you think about it?? should i get rid of it or do you like it?? HELP
