Hey everyone!! Here's another one for ya!!
Title: Going Back To Yesterday
Description: Dreams.Probably the only place where the road to our destiny is not too far, the challenges we face not too hard and the truth that eventually hits us is not so bitter.The place where the sky is close enough to touch and the stars are right there, waiting, for us to reach out and land amongst them.The place where all our fantasies,wishes and goals just wait patiently to see the light of the day ; to simply come true.
After two strenuous years of meeting deadlines and handing in assignments at the state university, Angela Johnson was more than satisfied to get the coveted degree in teaching that she had been yearning for.Then she,unexpectedly, finds  a chance and an opportunity to volunteer as a teacher in Ethiopia, helping the children there grow and learn.Going out alone to an unknown country and living in a country with distant mountains and picturesque waterfalls just waiting to be discovered sounded like Angela's dream were finally coming true.
But when one of the world's most rich and gorgeous bachelor decides to visit one of the teaching camps in Ethiopia( to make his contribution for the development there, apparently) and Angela sets herself for inevitable heartbreak, she realizes that dreams ,sometimes, remain just what they are.Dreams.
Author: BeingASuperNinja
GRADE: A+
In all honesty, this is one of the most beautifully written stories I have come across on Wattpad. The language is simple and basic, yet sophisticated and elegant. Grammar mistakes are VERY rare, I think I only came across 3 or 4. Great job on that!
As I always say, a plot is only cliche if you make it. This author managed to take something that could easily fall into the trap of being cliche and has completely turned it into a deep, meaningful story, with the twinks that make cliche stories popular. That added a new dimention of originality and authenticity for me:)
I think this is the first time I've felt the author present in the story, meaning that for the first time I feel like I know the author after reading her story. It's a solid, light-hearted, enjoyable read!
Overall Excellent job!!
Now for the only problem I had with this. The description. It is WAY TOO LONG!!!
A description is key to any reader. Always imagine the reader being in a rush or something and only has time o read 5-6 lines. Basically, you have 5 lines to impress the reader. Yours felt like 3 different descriptions at once. So, shorten the description down!! It'll do the world for you!:)
INTERVIEW:
1)How long have I been writing?
BeingASuperNinja: Probably ever since I discovered this website :) I used to read like alot of books but never really had the courage to write one myself, thinking that nobody would ever want to read it. Stumbling upon this site was just sheer luck :D
2)Why should your story be read?
BeingASuperNinja: The same reason that all stories and books are read, to get to know what the writer is trying to say. Everybody has something to share, something to say. They just need somebody to listen.By reading my story, you are just being that good listener :) And of course, my story should be read if someone wants a good read :P
3)What inspired you to write this story?
BeingASuperNinja: I really like writing. Though I wasn't quite sure if anyone would be interested in reading my stories. I just decided to find out for myself and write my very first story!
4)What do you hope your readers get out of your story?
BeingASuperNinja: A good read that they enjoyed! And the feeling that they want to know what happens next :)
That was it!!
'Going Back To Yesterday' by BeingASuperNinja. A recommended read:)
External link to the story is found below as always!
Have a good one!
-Ty
YOU ARE READING
Book Of Advertisements(NOT ACCEPTING ANY REQUESTS FOR THE TIME BEING)
RandomA collection of graded and reviewed wattpad stories. Go inside to find out how to get your story on here!(
