ESCAPE FROM THE FUTURE

ESCAPE FROM THE FUTURE

89.9K Reads 1K Votes 42 Part Story
Dean C. Moore By deancmoore Completed

Less than forty years into the future, most of mankind has elected to upload themselves to digital nirvana, where they can live as many lives as they care to in parallel, in as many different fantasy worlds as they desire.  A small percentage of humans, however, are loath to give up the mortal coil.  These last holdouts are the escapees from the future.  The question is, for how long? Will Mother, the sentient internet, be content with gentle prodding to upgrade and uplift?  Or will she resort to more coercive means? Has she already, unbeknownst to the final holdouts?

  • androids
  • artificial
  • city
  • cyberpunk
  • detective
  • detectives
  • dystopia
  • future
  • intelligence
  • investigation
  • near
  • new
  • robots
  • singularity
  • story
  • technothriller
  • transhuman
  • uplifting
  • york
  • zen
ShaunPierre ShaunPierre Jun 28, 2017
Very unique writing style that paces the flow of your words lime none other I've ever seen. Great descriptions as well.
UnbrokenHull UnbrokenHull Feb 21, 2015
line 4 - 6 in the 3rd paragraph from the start states that the girl is sitting with her knees straight out in front of her, which is generally how people sit in cars. I think you meant her legs straight out. Maybe put that in, since anyone who notices it will be pulled out the story.
TyGuy24 TyGuy24 Jan 16, 2015
Nice, this book is written really well. It could seriously be a real book, unlike a lot of books on wattpad
LucyAndLaura LucyAndLaura Aug 14, 2014
Amazing c: And if u have nothing else to do, you could read: The end of every beginning
StayCleanNeverBeMean StayCleanNeverBeMean Jul 12, 2014
This is to much 4 my brain to handle! Words that I didn't even kno existed ! Still reading tho!
AngelaStevens562 AngelaStevens562 Dec 06, 2013
I like the improvements to this draft. It reads so much better and flows better.
                              
                              The scene with Louis and Frank- there are a few overly long and sticky sentences that could do with another looking at . Other than that just somemini tweaks