Divergent: I can't believe you

By Bookworm4and6

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In the process of being edited. Also I wrote this as a fetus literally I was 13 and finished it by 14 but sti... More

Divergent: I Can't Believe You You Cheater
chapter 1 .
Chapter 2
Chapter 3 (2 years after Tobias cheated)
Chapter FOUR (; Lunch
Chapter 5 Pre Zekes party
Chapter SIX:- Let the games begin
Chapter 7:- Things Start to Heat Up
Chapter 8:- The Morning After
Chapter 9:- Later at Tris'
Chapter Ten:- The Intruder.
Chapter 11
Chapter 12:- Marcus
Chapter 13:- Abnegation.
Chapter 14 Can you keep a secret from Tris?
Chapter 15 The ring (;
Chapter 16 Just Jump !
Chapter 18:- Jealousy
Chapter 19 Fights!
(SPOILER) Authors note !
Chapter 20
READ
Chapter 21 Finishing touches.
Chapter 22 Bacholorette Party
Chapter 23 Bacholors Patry!
Chapter 24 I Do?
Chapter 25 The After Party
Authors note
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 28 Part 2
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Authors not sorry if you thought it was a chap
P.S.
Chapter 32
Divergent Movie Venting
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Please Read!
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Epilouge
Sequel Information !
Bonus Chapter
Check It out
Thank You
Finale A NOTE
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Chapter 17

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{ Edited by @Sprinkle_Of_Zalfie }
AN Thank you so much to the readers with dedication ! I love you all and hope you like this chapter!

Tris POV

and see..... Tobias on one knee and then he starts "Tris we met 3 three years ago right here, and from that moment I knew I loved you. You are the most amazingly beautiful person too ever walk into my life, would you do me the honor of being with me forever, Tris will you marry me?" I'm frozen on the spot I'm sure my cheeks are flushed, and I'm smiling crazily, but I manage too somehow get the word "Yes" to slip from my lips. As I say yes Tobias stands up wraps his arms around me and says "I love you Tris Prior." I knew he wouldn't say my full name mostly because we were in front of the initiatives but I don't care, I just care that me and him are finally engaged, I have to tell Christina!

"Okay" Tobias starts "I Four and this here is Tris as you all know, but you can call her Six. We will be training you. There are three stages, Physical, mental, and emotional. Physical starts tomorrow bright and early at 8 a.m." Than one Candor girl ask "Why are your name numbers?" awe a little Christina how cute but instead of saying that I walk over to her and say, well more like yell, "If I wanted a Candor smart mouth I would have joined their faction." She nods and cowers behind some candor who looks extremely like Will .

We're almost done with the tour, we're at the Chasm and Tobias says "The chasm is a tester, showing the fine line before idiocy and bravery, one jump can end your life, it's happened before, it will happen again." At the memory of Al jumping I can't help but frown. Tobias finally says "You have the day off but we expect to see you at 8 a.m. Don't be late. There are consequences. At the moment there ate 15 of you however at the end of training end 5 of you will be factionless and 10 will be Dauntless. You are dismissed."

Me and Tobias walk hand in hand too our apartment. We instantly went to our room, Tobias just layed down and sighed. "What's wrong? You aren't happy with my answer?" He sits up so quickly and with a shocked expression and said "Oh god no, I'm happy I'm just tired its been a long day and I was nervous." I smile and give him a reassuring kiss and say "No need to be nervous, I need to tell Christina . So how about we have lunch with everyone tomorrow and make an announcement?" He just nods "Oh and what's the date going to be cause me and Christina need to plan it and everything." He looks up to me and says "Whenever you want, I'm just happy as long as I'm at one end of the aisle with you walking towards me and there's Dauntless cake." I smile nod and say "Okay 3 weeks that gives me time to buy a dress plan the wedding and we are writing vowels right?" He nods and says "I already have them planned in my head"

With that we change and lay down to sleep, it may only be 9:30 but we're tired and we have training tomorrow and that's going to be a lot of work.

AN: Im sorry its a way short chapter but I was busy all week. Im skipping school tomorrow I have a dentist apt I will start and maybe update again but no promises. I have track and school so I will be busy especially with homework, let me remind you I want to kill whoevers bright idea it was to have honors classes especially since in in all honors classes. I hope you liked the chapter Teaser for the next one; one of the initiatives has a crush on Tris (; Lmao well I love you guys Thanks you Veronica Roth great inspiration (; If you want me to read one of you stories comment the name and I will I promise I ran out of books and people take forever to update ! VOTE/COMMENT

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