Can't Keep A Promise

By QueenMew

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Third book of Commitment - Can't Keep A Promise || In The Works || Second book of Commitment - Family Values... More

Prolouge
Chapter One: Parents History
Chapter Three: Rain On Me
Chapter Four : Rico
Chapter Five
Chapter Six: Poor Girl
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eleven: Jasmine
Chapter Twelve: Boom
Chapter Thirteen: Promise , whats up with you?
Chapter Fourteen: All The Time
Chapter Fifteen: Family
Chapter Sixteen: Distant
Chapter Seventeen: Mistakes
Chapter Eighteen: Another Nigga
Chapter Nineteen: A Whole Damn 8 Months
Chapter Twenty : Time is Passing
Chapter Twenty One :I'm Done
Chapter Twenty Two: Its been a while.
Chapter Twenty Three
Chapter Twenty Four : A rainy day. (Last Chapter)
JASMINE IS UP

Chapter Two: Punishment

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" But daddy , she disrespected y'all . I had to fight that b- girl because she wasn't going to get away with it " I whined and my dad shook his head at me .

" No , you shouldn't be coming home at no fucking 12:00 at night because you was at the police station all day for a fight Promise . This is your fucking millionth fight this year and the police said if they see you fighting again , you going to jail for real " My dad yelled at me making me scrunch up my face .

" Then tell them hoes at my school to leave me the fück alone and tell them to stop talking shït . I wouldn't haven't to use these bitches for no reason . They get smart , I'm gone punch them in they shit " I yelled at my dad for the first time . If it was one of my brothers , he'll call them a man . If it comes down to his " princess " , we would get in so much trouble . I didn't even tell him I was dating .

" Promise , who the fuck you cussing at ? Give me these damn devices and shit . You on fücking punishment and if you say another damn word , I'll take you over your grandma's house for an ass whipping cause your mama sure as hell ain't gone do it " Jayceon yelled . He doesn't even deserve the dad title right now because I'm fücking pissed .

" Take it . I can do better things than play on that shït anyway" I mumbled under my breath and handed him all my electronics . It was my IPhone . My laptop . My tablet and my Apple Watch .

" Say it louder Promise . I didn't hear you " Jayceon said making me roll my eyes .

" I didn't say anything " I mumbled and he mugged me as he walked out the room with all my shit . I got up and slammed the door .

He came back and took the house phone out my room making me gasp . He literally unplugged that old ass phone and took the cords too . My dad is an asshole .

" Since you wanna slam doors and shit like you pay bills " He said as he poked his head back in my room and left .

" Since you wanna slam doors and shït like you pay bills " I mocked after him and shut my door gently .

" You better not lock it either " He yelled .

" You better not lock it either " I mocked and laughed at myself .

Junior walked in my room with a loud ass laugh and laughed at me making me scrunch up my face .

" You better not lock that door either Promise . Aye , can you watch Destiny ?" Junior asked . Junior is my twin of course . Junior had a baby with this grown ass little girl down the street . My dad didn't say anything but my mom sure as hell did . My dad is a sexist bastard .

" Yeah , she's only a newborn anyway . All she do is eat and shït " I said and Junior left out my room to go get Destiny . He came back and handed me her . She looked just like my brother . Her caramel skin was coming in as her curly hair was laid against her head .

" Alright , I gotta blast " Junior said as he left out the room . My room was a blue and lime color . It was the same color forever ever since I could remember . It was beautiful. I had my room in the far right side with the tv and the dresser was on the left side with my closet . My ceiling had those glow stars in the dark and these hippy beads traced along my walls . Call me childish , I'll take them off and roll them down the steps .

Destiny had the same eyes and lips as my brother . Her small hands covered over my finger as I laid her down on her stomach across my bed . She better had already ate . Destiny is greedy and can drink a bottle up . I'll just give her to Jasmine .

Junior Point Of View

" Whatever Jay , you just a fücking liar. I know you was with that bitch . I know you was . " Kaylen yelled as I shook my head . Kaylen is graduating with us this Friday . She was a light skinned girl and was a average height . She was short compared to my ass any way . I'm 6 ' 3 and she was like a midget .

" Kaylen , do me a favor and shut the fuck up please ? The only reason we at the mall right now getting you and my daughter some clothes is because your my baby mother . If you wasn't , I wouldn't give a fuck about you any damn way . We are not a couple " I told her and she scoffed as she started to look on the baby rack .

Don't get me wrong , of course I love Kaylen . Kaylen was my first love but ever since she came back from Atlanta , she changed . She changed into a damn whore . I didn't even know if Destiny was mines or my cousin's . Kaylen was fucking me while she was fucking Mason . Mason got this grudge against me because Kaylen choose me over his ugly ass . He can have her back all I give a damn , as long as she leave me the fuck alone .

When I bought the clothes , we walked out the store in the mall . Kaylen grabbed my hand and I snatched back . The fuck she think this is ? I don't think Kaylen will ever get used to us not being together . We knew eachother since middle school . I never knew for her to turn out into some hoe .

As soon was we walked out the mall and got in the car , she started her shit again. Kaylen started to cry tears as she wiped them away from her face .

" Jayceon why you acting like you don't love me no more ? I'm sorry for what I did and we knew eachother this long to come this far to not even be together " Kaylan asked me as I crunk up the Peach Honda . I groaned and pulled out the parking lot .

" Cause your a whore who tried to pin a baby on me who didn't even know if it was mines or Mason. " I said in a blunt way and she scoffed .

" I didn't know y'all were cousins "

" Kaylan sit back and hush your damn mouth before this be the day I put my hands on a woman ."

" Man , can I get destiny tomorrow ?" Kaylan asked me with a pout on her face .

" No , next week . She's going over my grandparents house this weekend "

Kaylan was a good mother . You couldn't lie about that . She always dropped her off on time and picked her up on time . Kaylan does what a mother is supposed to do and if she didn't , I wouldn't let her see Destiny .

Plus , Kaylan has a bad temper . I had to restrain myself so many times because she thought punching and slapping me was a good idea . When I kicked her ass out my house , she had plenty times to rethink her actions . Her ass better take her medicine because I got Promise to threaten her one time . Kaylan was scared of my sister noticing she hasn't lost a fight yet .

" Thank you Jayceon " Kaylan said I parked at her house .

" Mhm "

" Jay-"

" Get out my car Kaylan" I said cutting her off and she huffed . She grabbed the bags and slammed the door . I mean what else what am I supposed to do , I may love her ass but I'm not gone cave into her thot ass . Destiny was born 8 weeks ago and that Dna test was 6 weeks ago . Let's not mention that she also took Destiny to Mason house.

Kaylan Point Of View

I started to un bag the stuff Jay bought me and put them into my drawers . I missed Jay but it is my fault we aren't together . He doesn't love me anymore like I guessed. We may grew up together but I messed up bad . Even though he's my kid's father , we aren't getting back together no time soon .

" Kaylan , bring your ass in here" My mother , Charmaine said . I rolled my eyes and walked to the living room . She pointed at the night stand.

" Hand me the remote "

I was officially pissed . I know her old ass didn't call me to go get this damn remote which she is sitting next to it . Her ass can just reach over . I picked it up and tossed it over to her . Her eyes snapped at me for tossing it at her .

" Anyways , when my grand baby coming back ?"

" Next week ma . She's going to her other grandparents house " I told her .

" About that , we're moving back to Atlanta . Your step father wants us to move back up there and we are going back up there . You can graduate and then we are taking Destiny with us "

" Mom , you can't do that shit . Jay loves his daughter and were basically committing kidnap . Do you know what his family will do to me ? Especially his sister ? Mom , no . We have to stay here" I yelled at her and my mother stood up .

" No , we are going up there and staying for good . We can get full custody of Destiny and Junior can come see her. Shit , he don't love you no more so why you stressing over his ass ?" My mom yelled .

" Ma , your still mad that his mother whipped your ass a long time ago back over HER man ? That was a long time and you got to let that shit go . "

" Don't speak to your mother like that " Mike said as he came out the bedroom with boxers on and wrapped his arms around my mother's waist . My mom smiled as he rubbed his palm with her thumb .

" Your not my damn daddy . I don't have a daddy as long as I'm concerned . My daddy is dead . Thank you for your fucking information . " I scolded and my mama gasped .

" See , I told you to kick her bad ass out when we was in Atlanta for good . She should've stayed a damn hobo looking shelter like she used to do instead of coming back to New Orleans to get knocked up by some damn hood ass nigga up the street  . He sells damn dope ! " Mike yelled as he pointed his finger at me .  Tears started to fill my eyes . I was homeless back in Atlanta . I was too shamed to call Jay . He has no right to speak about my baby dad like that considering he actually had a job , even though it isn't legal .

" Shut your ass up Mike ! I hate you " I yelled and ran back in my room as tears rolled down my face . My mother is such a bitch . Why we have to move back because of his bitch ass ?

" You want to disrespect me ? I'm gone beat your ass like I'm your real damn daddy " Mike said as he came into my room with a belt and grabbed me by my foot , dragging me off the bed . He started to hit me across my chest with the belt as my mother screamed in the background . I started to yell out for help kicking my feet . He beat me across my back and he yanked at my pants .

Mike ripped off my grey pants and started to whip me in my draws . I yelled as blood started to come out the wounds of my old scabs . He turned the belt over and hit me with the metal piece . It flew over my mouth and popped me straight in my mouth .

Mike stopped and closed the door . My mother didn't even help me . He locked the door and got in between my legs . I gasped and sat up . I got off the floor and he dragged me back to the ground . It's not about to go down like this .

" Mama ! Call Jay !" I screamed and Mike covered my mouth .

" Nah , you did enough for that hoodling " He told me in my ear as his hand ran across my private area making me cringe .

" Just lay there Kaylan . You don't even have to put up a fight "

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