Becoming a Ninja (Naruto fan-fic) -Rewriting-

Chapter 11- Fighting Haku, what did I miss?

I do not own Naruto
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Naruto grinned as he threw a couple paper bombs, smoke bombs following. Jumping out, with me behind him, he shouted. "Naruto Uzumaki-" I cut him off "And Yuki Okami".

"At your service. The hero always shows up at the last minute in every stor-" I glanced to the side seeing a shine. Naruto had been too caught up in the moment to see the kunai heading his way.

I was about to reflect it when a masked boy caught it surprising everyone.

"What's the meaning of this Haku?" Zabuza demanded.

"Please, let me deal with these three my way." That voice, it sounded familiar.

I looked over to see Sasuke cut up by needles inside some sort of mirror barrier. I looked closer at it, it seemed very complex for a jutsu. If I remember correctly, ice style jutsu was a type of Kekkai Genkai. At least I remember studying that at my clan.

I turned on my Tensai as I studied the mirrors. I studied it looking for any weakness. When I saw it, Naruto had to be a idiot and drag me into the trap with him.

"Pst Saskue we came in here to save you." Naruto whispered.

"Um, Naruto you dragged me in here with you." I added slightly more quiet looking around nervously at all the mirrors around us.

"Naruto you loser, you could have attacked the outside! We were in perfect position!" Saskue yelled making Naruto frustrated.

"Hey I came in here to save you and all you do is yell at me! Right Yuki-chan?" I sighed at Naruto.

"I'm sorry to break this to you Naruto-kun, but we might have stood a chance if us two were out there. So S-Sasuke was r-r-right." I said bluntly, wincing as I admitted Sasuke being right. It left a bitter taste in my mouth. "I hate saying he's right." I murmured.

"Oh, well I'll just sneak outside!" I shook my head at Naruto's ignorance.

"I don't think that's going to cut it Naruto-kun. If I'm right he," I pointed to the boy I remember as Haku. "Has full control of this situation. I don't think he's just going to let you out."

That was when needels showered on us, "Don't forget about me now." He teased.

My eyes widened as I saw him moving incredible fast from one mirror to the next. My Tensai helped me see his movements, as it was trying out how to copy it.

Wincing as needles stuck into me, I formed handsigns. "Crimson fruit." I said as a crystal pink barrier formed around Naruto, Saskue and I. Releasing my Tensai I let out a breath as needles bounced off my crystal.

"There we can get a plan from here. This crystal should protect us." That was when I saw Sasuke's eyes. No longer were his eyes an ebony, but a deep crimson. Though he only had one comma in his eyes, which leads me to believe it wasn't fully developed like Kakashi's.

I gasped softly, "The Sharingan." I whispered catching Saskue's attention.

He smirked slightly at my observation before taking control. "Naruto use your shadow clone jutsu, maybe you can distract him, Yuki you work on trying to break the mirrors. I'll try to grab Haku." He ordered as I sweatdropped.

"You do know that this crystal is not sound proof right?" He ignored me, "I mean, he just heard your whole plan. You didn't even whisper it or use code." I sighed as I released the jutsu. Quickly Naruto made his clones while Sasuke tried to track Haku.

I did know one jutsu to break a mirror, only problem my illness would act up making me useless. Plus the mirror would just grow back. Haku continued to shower us in needles, I winced in slight pain as they all pierced my body.