Name: Lucille Adams
Age: 11-17 (This book will have all her Hogwarts years)
Fandom: Harry Potter, Next Generation
Yikes
Plot: She's a Halfblood with who got accepted into Hogwarts and got sorted into Hufflepuff
Gender: Female
Backstory: She was born on May 15th, 2006 and she lives in Godric Hallow with her parents and older brother, Micheal
Maybe give a bit more backstory???
Appearance: She has a heart shaped face. Her skin is pale with a natural pink tint to her cheeks. Before her first year, her hair is pale blonde but a classmate dyed it bubblegum pink for a prank.
This is a bit Mary Sue
She ended up liking it and her hair is pink. She has really bad acne and her front tooth is chipped from riding her skateboard down an extremely steep, concrete hill. She had had few scars from rough housing and a particularly nasty scar from an infected hug bite
She has physical flaws which I pretty uncommon👍🏼
Species: Human
Strengths: Kind, loyal, accepting, imaginative, learns fairly quickly
Weaknesses: Naive, too hopeful, trusts people too easily, she's too nice to people and that allows them to walk all over her, overracts about everything, scared of basically everything, has trouble keeping still and concentrating
I feel like those are the weaknesses for every hufflepuff
Powers: She's MAGIC!
Lol
Friends: Susan Lupin-Black (OC)(Sirius and Remus are alive in my story just because they are, don't question it),
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Albus Potter, Rose Flinch-Flenchy, Lorcan and Lysander Scamander (too many people forget about them), Alice Longbottom The Second
Enemies: None, really. She doesn't have any people that she considers enemies. If someone is rude, she avoids them and tries not to retaliate.
Ok I hate it when people have no enemies. How is there any plot then??
Mary Sue: 80%
Originality: 20%
Interest: 30% id read it if you changed up a few aspects of your character
Statement: hufflepuffs are boring...jk
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