Name: Mel Shyvlin
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Sexuality: GAYYy
is he gay or European ( sorry, reference to legally blonde the musical. I need a life)
Fandom: Undertale (Though I don't just keep him in that fandom. He's in an original fandom.)
interesting
Personality: Silly most of the time, slightly slutty (o boi), he never shows his actual feelings most of the time, and hides them by acting as if all he cares about is his job.
this is slightly unoriginal since I feel like most OCs are secretive and don't show their feelings
Appearance: Slightly long and curly dark brown hair that's dyed silver at the ends. He is really tall, like 8 feet 11 inches. He wears the same turquoise jacket every day that hangs low on his arms, a gray t-shirt, gray sweatpants and silver-gray boots.
hmmm, that's....tall. but I guess it fits since this is an undertale fanfiction.
Species: Human
wait why is he so tall
Powers: None.
Weakness(es): He goes a bit crazy if he sees blood, but it leaves him VERY vulnerable to getting hurt.
Backstory: He was bullied a lot as a kid, especially for how tall he was. At around 18, he began to keep his true feelings away from everyone, hiding them behind his generally happy disposition (I hope that's the word.) and job as a pleasure slave. A while after turning 23, he met Zeke. (Zeke is another O.C.) So far, Zeke is the only one who has seen what Mel is truly like underneath his disguise personality.
oh wow. that's a little cliché. he had a rough past and only one person has seen their true identity....
Friends: Zeke.
Enemies: None so far.
This makes me angry. if they have no enemies, who is the antagonist.
FORGOT A THING.
Appearance: He's really pale-skinned, and he has icy blue eyes.
I look into your eyes and the skies the limit (lol another musical reference but this time it's Hamilton. please help)
Mary-Sue: 60% he's secretive, has no enemies, was bullied, and almost 9 feet tall...I think that speaks for itself
Originality: 50% I love his name and the way he looks. also his personality is pretty good.
Interest: 85% I'm not really into undertale but I kinda wanna read this.
Statement: Why is he 8'11 and I'm only 5'1
Admin: Eliza💖
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