Regarding the ending

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Hello !

So I had a few feedbacks, mostly about the ending and apparently it was average.

Want to maybe tell what is bad about the ending ? The idea? The redaction  (knowing that it is in need of edition indeed). Or maybe you would even want to share with me the ending you were waiting for? I am all up for constructing criticism! I'm here to learn after all.

Good day to you and thanks for reading.

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