This is my second ive written where I was seriously writing not just to pass the time a hobby or to get some thought out of my head, this is the story of Gavin, i one day want to make this into a graphic novel. That is if i finish it...I started Gavin I believe 3 years ago written over a long summer working at the pool and watching swimmers and tanners all day in the sun. Sitting behind the glass in the air conditioning and continued to write on the plane and during my trip to Arizona, California, and back home....To be put upon a shelf unfinished. Such dedication during vacation possibly wasted but now it come out again and i'd love to continue to write his story. Tell me what you think please and maybe it will continue once more...note its i the first draft stage
sorry for the bad grammer when finished i will correct everything and i might change a few things when i try to publish it and add a few details make the chapters longer. Enjoy & comment!
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I finally realized i was awake, taking me a few minutes to actually do so. Then realizing id reached consciousness i regretted it immediately. Usually when you wake up you can't help it and you cant go back to sleep.
Pain, that is all there was around me, so bad you can't think or see, truly awful. Trying not to talk, that is something you should definatly put on you not to do list in this situation. Moving, dont go there either.
'hes awake'
'how do you know?'
they watched him siliently for a moment as he struggled.
'waa...?' escaped finally from his lips.
'yeah heas awake.'
The world was screaming into my ears and something was moving toward me. The footsteps and slight slide as each foot came across the tiled floor sounded like gushots and cannon fire beside my head. Whispers above me came as thunder shaking the ground. Something went over my ears and eyes, every sound and thing stopped it was the miricle i couldnt expect to come to me.
All i could hear now was my own movments; my breathing and my franticly beating heart
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Gavin's Story(on hold)
Science FictionI finally realized i was awake, taking me a few minutes to actually do so. Then realizing id reached consciousness i regretted it immediately. Usually when you wake up you can't help it and you cant go back to sleep. Pain, that is all there was aro...
