First off, thank you to everyone who has read and voted for Fallen. I'm so glad you guys like the story! Some time ago, I reread it again for myself and discovered many new comments on my story.
People are not happy with the age gap I wrote. Rightfully so, it's gross. I was 17 when I wrote it, so what the hell did I know?
Anyway, I wrote a revision of it. It's pretty much all the same except that I made my character older, and added a bit more depth to her. I'm going to leave this version up for anyone who still wants to read it, but I highly suggest checking out the new version.
It's still a little cringey, cause I didn't want to change too much of it, but I think it's better than it was. I hope you check it out!
Happy reading!
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Fallen
FanfictionShe was just a normal girl with a semi-normal life. Her mother was a die-hard Christian, and her father wasn't around. Then everything changed. Now she sits in a motel room with two strangers and the father she never knew. And she knows her true ide...
