Master From Another World (on Hiatus)

NEED HELP AND ANNOUNCEMENT

Hi everyone LunaWu here.

Today, I'm asking for help for coming up ideas, plots especially action scenes.

I was having a hard time coming up action scenes on my novels, so I really need your help. I am not good at describing when it comes to action scenes so I don't know if it's enjoyable to read.

If you have any ideas come in mind, I will gladly hear you out as long as its still connected to ending of the story.

And I'm sorry if this is not a chapter. I was really having a hard time for the plot to happen but I swear to update soon.

And for the ANNOUNCEMENT. I was thinking of a new book but I am not sure if I should publish it. Here is a sample of the new book.

PROLOGUE

- THIRD-PERSON VIEW -

Hell

The City was burning in flames. Destroyed Buildings, shops, and houses. Screams of the citizens are everywhere. Dead bodies were scattered in the ground. Some squashed by debris. It was literal hell. And in the middle of all that was two children walking in that Chaos.

Two children walk side by side holding each other. The little boy was walking aimlessly while holding hands and covering his sister's eyes. The little girl was holding her brother tightly while covering her eyes, but she's able to get a glimpse of dead bodies.

"Don't look." The boy said to his sister and covered her eyes.

"Mhm." She nodded as they continued to walk. "Uwah!" But she tripped and made a scratch on her knee. "Waaaahhhh!!!" Then she started crying. Her brother kneeled at her level.

"Shhh... It's okay. It's okay." He said while he's trying to calm her down. He tore his sleeve and wrapped it on her wound. "If we find some help, then we'll treat it quickly. So don't-"

While talking he saw a hand right beside her sister that must have what she tripped by. He was sort of panicking on the inside. Her sister notice his sudden change expression she turn her head to see what he was staring at. But was stopped by his brother.

"You know what I'll give you a piggyback ride." He said with a smile trying to make her look away from the corpse.

"O-okay." She said with a sad smile. She knew that he was trying to avoid looking at what he was staring at. Her brother turned around and lets her ride his back.

"Come on." He offered. She nodded and rode his back, wrapping her arms around his neck. He stood while holding her legs. "You can sleep while I'm carrying you."

"Okay." As she fell asleep on his back.

He continued to walk while carrying his sister. He's been walking for hours as he began to feel dizzy. His vision became blurry and collapse on the ground. This made the little girl wake up and see her brother lying on the ground. She approached him and starts to shake him.

"Onii-chan? Onii-chan! Onii-chan!!!" She shouted trying to wake him up as her eyes starts to tear up.

But he didn't answer.

She was panicking she doesn't know what to do. She continued to shake him with much force, but he wouldn't wake up as her tears run down her cheeks.

"P-please please wake up." She looked up and starts to look around. "HELP!!! Somebody help! Please!!!" She cried for help. "Anybody!" But to no avail. "Mama! Papa!"

She continued to scream for help. As she exhaust herself and collapsed beside her brother. She was losing hope and accepted her fate.

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"H-y-re-you alright?" Someone spoke.

The little girl slightly opens her eyes as she saw someone coming.

"Thank goodness." Her savior said with a sad smile on his face. "Are you okay?" He asked and she nodded as her answer. He then starts to tear up as he smiled genuinely.

"My...brother..." She said weakly.

"He's still breathing. I'll take you both to safety." Reassuring the little girl. Then he carried the two red-headed children to a much safer area. "Just stay with me." As the young girl closes her eyes.

- ??? POV -

"Excuse me, I need a doctor!" Said the stranger who save me and my brother. As I heard the "Wee-woo." (A/N: She's still a kid so she doesn't know what it's called.) Close by.

"Lay them here." A woman's voice.

I feel that the stranger put me on a bed and put something in my face. Then someone opened one of my eyes.

"Hold still." The woman said while checking my eye, then she stopped and walk away somewhere and starts to talk to a stranger. "The boy is fine. He didn't inhale much smoke, which is a good thing."

When they mentioned my brother, I half opened my eyes and start to look for him. It's blurry but it's enough. Then I saw him, his eyes were closed and was breathing with the oxygen thingy.

"Onii.....chan," I said lowly.

"What about his sister?" The stranger asked.

"She'll live. But unlike him, she got too much smoke in her lungs." She replied.

"We need to take them to the hospital immediately." The woman said as she took me to a 'Wee-woo.' "You're going to be okay." She said to me.

I feel sleepy so I close my eyes and went to sleep.

So what do you think? Oh and this is a Fate stay night x My Hero Academia Fanfic.

- No magecraft except if its Heroic Spirits Abilities.

- Some of the abilities of the main cast of Fate will consider as quirks.

- Again it's brother and sister story (not much).

- And it's not isekai genre.