A/N: Updates and Rewrite Version

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Hi! I'll finally be returning from being hiatus soon. I'm sorry to keep you all waiting!

I'm going to unpublish this book soon so that I can rewrite them. While maintaining the original plot's flow, additional details like illustrations and a new direction for the story will be introduced.

I hope you'll join Rei and Ei's story once more!

By the way, do you prefer calling Rei as Y/N? Or should I just stick to her original name?

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Some changes for Rei's design:

(Yukari) Rei's initial design (full body) 10/9/2021

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(Yukari) Rei's initial design (full body) 10/9/2021

(Yukari) Rei's initial design (full body) 10/9/2021

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Rei's current design (half body) 11/5/2021

If you haven't seen it on my Instagram, I updated Rei's outfit that is inspired from Ei and Makoto's kimono as seen during the Raiden Shogun's backstory cutscene.

The color combination came from the purple and white of Ei and Makoto's kimono.

The color combination came from the purple and white of Ei and Makoto's kimono

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I'm still considering if Rei would retain her Electro Vision from the rewrite version.

I thought some change if she'll not retain her Electro Vision like:

✓ Rei would use a fake Vision to save Thoma and to direct the Vision Hunt Ceremony to her in order to confront the Raiden Shogun.

This is also the time where Rei would meet Lumine for the first time

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About the Together Through Eternity and it's rewrite version.

As I stated on my very first A/N, this is the first time I've written a Genshin fanfic. I know myself that my story (Act One) is really dependent on the Genshin's Archon Quest Chapter Two as I just added my OC (Yukari/Rei) and some small change with her existence.

However, on the rewrite version, I wanted to see if I improved my writing while not relying too much on the Genshin's Archon Quest Chapter Two.

I hope you guys will read and enjoys it as much as the first version of TTE. This time, I'm quite happy and satisfied with the results since I have completely grasped my fanfic. I hope you guys too...

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- Hikarhyumie

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