I know that my book is kind of out of place and really weird to some of you. I didn’t anticipate that all of you would like it, but I would really like to hear from you guys more.
I would also like to hear your advice even criticism is fine. I want to know how to make it better and I want to know how you really think.
I will always care about what you think. Tell me, please.
I know that some of you think my book is very confusing and I would really like to know what you are confused about. Sometimes it is really hard for me to see what part is confusing.
I would like you to put anything that you’re confused about in this section.
Are you confused about:
1. Ali’s school, did you understand that she finish high school and is in college right now.
A: Yes, I’m confused
B: I’m not confused
2. Did you understand that Ali is afraid of Levi bc he was cold and distant
3. Where Lucas came from, did you understand that she found him in a castle
4. relationship between Levi and Ali, did you understand that levi was ali's ex boyfriend and Levi broke up with Ali
5. where is Ali now and where is Ali a few month ago, did you understand that she moved from Illinois to NY.
6. Lucas talking in 3rd person, like "did you like Lucas?" said lucas. (I mainly did this to make him seem childish and cute)
This has already been fixed to first person, so If you still see this problem, please notify me, and tell me where in the story.
7. etc….
Anything you put here, I will consider editing to make it clearer, so make sure to speak up.
Sorry that I haven’t updated for a while. It’s mainly family and personal issues.
I have a surgery tomorrow. Depending how ill I feel, I will try to update soon.
Thank you for the 100k read, 2k vote, 500 comment!! :)
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Billionaire's love
RomanceA force pushed her against the wall, his body crashed into hers, her hand pushed against his chest. His chest was smooth, and his leans muscle was hard as a rock. His vibrant eyes looked at her. He leaned closer to her. She can feel his breath on he...
