Genre:
Teen Fiction Romance.
Short Summary of the Story:
Adam Dole has had a crush on Trinity Baker for four years even though she doesn't give him the time of the day. Follow Adam as he fights to win over his dream girl, at any cost.
Short Summary of the Chapter:
Trinity finally accepts her own attraction towards Adam and agrees to be his girlfriend.
Review:
Adam's obsession with Trinity can be felt in each of his thought, action and reaction...so much so that he comes across as stalker-ish. The emotions are detailed and the descriptions vivid. Trinity's explanation and change of heart could have been described a little more in detail. Somehow at this point of time, it just appears as if she needs him just because he makes her feel wanted. Maybe a flashback in her point of view would have been suitable.
The long, detailed make out session could have been shortened. It may not be palatable to all readers.
Suggestions to the writer:
I found one or two spelling and grammatical errors. Just proof read it once.
Final Verdict:
** out of *****.
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THE CHAPPIE AWARDS - REVIEWS
Non-FictionHonest reviews of the chapters entered into 'The Chappie Awards, July 2011'. To be read with a pinch of salt.
