Dear Katt29,
This story catchy!
At the beginning, (the preview) I recommend italic, because it gives a sense of either memory or dreaming.
It was memorable when you said she had a sense of guilt, and the reader would ask; Why? Why this strong sense of guilt? It left the reader hanging for more!
I loved the twist of the note, even though I'm sure it's part of the plot.
Not many spelling errors, or run-on sentences.
Upload, its quite addictive!
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