MsCuPiD121!
Wow! I mean, WOW! This one is a keeper! This is amazing! So much emotion! So much feeling and description!! I love the jumps of memory, and how she lives her life day-to-day! It makes me curious, and I wonder; Will she tell her friends about her cutting? Will she tell her dad?
Keep writing, there is a talent hidden there, in that mind of yours.
Noname O.o
Date: 19 March 2011
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