The Abused Girl

The Abused Girl

27 Part Story 447K Reads 7.3K Votes
dawn By dawn1989 Updated Jul 20, 2014

Jessie was a normal 16 year old girl. She didnt know her real dad untill she met him when she was 13. She though he was the best and she was happy she found him...untill something more sinister started to happen.....

Mart sue, where are you? Oh here she is!!! And Gary stu has gotta be here too!!!
pr3ttygurljaz pr3ttygurljaz Oct 08, 2015 02:55AM
My mum would instantly know that that is a lie. I don't do my homework at home, I do it at school! Duh
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x-Mxriyanna-x x-Mxriyanna-x May 25, 2015 11:05PM
great story so far, but I think you shouldn't write about the father abusing the girl it would be more interesting if her boyfriend was abusing her
My 72 lines!!!! I think but I counted so who's stupid now??? Hehehe
ElijahTheGoat ElijahTheGoat Mar 18, 2014 08:45PM
I really don't wanna sound like a bitch but to help you add more detail and don't rush into it so fast