The Girl He Saved
By saracha-sauce
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Mina, a 15 year-old girl, is never really noticed by anyone. Her father left Mina and her mother when she was just 4 years old. She is often the target of bullies because she is an otaku.
One day, she decided she had enough. She made her decision.
She would jump and end it right there.
But what happens when someone grabs her by the hand and pulls her to safety? And that person just so happens to be her next door neighbor and the love of her life, Sora.
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Alright, so this has so, so, so many grammar mistakes. Such as verb tenses, possible spelling errors, missing commas or periods, run on sentences, etc. I was in mostly 7th grade when I wrote this so please don't judge
Also, I think the description of the book and her father may be off. You'll get it around chapter 21 I believe. It may be different, I'm not positive.
One more thing... I'm planning for the rewrite to be published sometime in 2017 (: If you don't follow me, keep this in your library and I'll post an announcement saying its up. I promise it will be a million times better, will make much more sense, and won't be as... rushed.
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