Merlin magic reveal

Merlin magic reveal

13.1K Reads 577 Votes 15 Part Story
Fandomwriter07 By sparkle123tt Updated Jan 24, 2016

When merlin arthur and the knights get captured by morganna. What will happen? What if they find out merlins secret or worse what if morganna tells them what he's done? Uh oh morganna better run cause merlin is pissed off.

SkylarO SkylarO May 31, 2016
Did you realize that the title on the cover of your book doesn't match the title of the actual book?
owllover22161 owllover22161 Sep 11, 2016
i'm sorry this is a great story but would it kill you to put in quotation marks? it's really confusing.
                              thanks
DragonLoverRed DragonLoverRed Dec 29, 2016
I will say, the story is written very well, but it needs a few gramatical fix ups here and there. I can fix them if you want.
Emrysstar Emrysstar Jan 21, 2016
Is this a Merthur or a Mergana? Can't tell. I think Mergana...
Emrysstar Emrysstar Jan 21, 2016
*facepalm* I don't want to look at the next part. Yet, I must suffer.
questionableatbest questionableatbest Jan 05, 2016
Speech marks/quotation marks would be very helpful in trying to decipher who is talking and when they are talking. Without them all the words are just pushed together and I can't tell when someone starts speaking:/ other than that, great story!