When merlin arthur and the knights get captured by morganna. What will happen? What if they find out merlins secret or worse what if morganna tells them what he's done? Uh oh morganna better run cause merlin is pissed off.
Did you realize that the title on the cover of your book doesn't match the title of the actual book?
i'm sorry this is a great story but would it kill you to put in quotation marks? it's really confusing.
Is this a Merthur or a Mergana? Can't tell. I think Mergana...
*facepalm* I don't want to look at the next part. Yet, I must suffer.
Speech marks/quotation marks would be very helpful in trying to decipher who is talking and when they are talking. Without them all the words are just pushed together and I can't tell when someone starts speaking:/ other than that, great story!
Fantastic story, but there are a lot of grammar mistakes that make it slightly harder to read. But the plot so far is awesome!