A Victim Of My Own Creation

A Victim Of My Own Creation

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RebylXander21 By RebylXander21 Updated Jul 20, 2011

Jayde doesn't usually have dreams, at least not since her parents died two years ago. So what happens when she starts having strange dreams with a hooded figure? Does this mean that something bad has happened or is going to happen? She grows closer to her new friend Blade and soon seeks comfort and advice from him about her dreams.As she struggles to figure out the message from the figure in her dreams what will Jayde do when she starts to question he friendship with Blade? She is yet to discover a huge secret that could tear her word apart and possibly change her forever....

RebylXander21 RebylXander21 May 21, 2011
thanks for the criticism...i'''l try to fix that part with the ice-cream...but i'm glad you liked the other parts....especially the ice cream in her face...lol :P
RebylXander21 RebylXander21 May 21, 2011
yea i kinda liked the fire part as well.....it made it seem as though it was part of her.......thanx for commenting :)
Yellow_Star Yellow_Star May 11, 2011
I have to say I like the characters. They are very relateable. Your writing is clear and easy to read.
wakikeVirgo1581 wakikeVirgo1581 May 03, 2011
language, i din know u could spell cuss words!!! very gud first chapter though :D
                              
unique5912 unique5912 Mar 13, 2011
dis is the beginning too the bestt storyy evaa! lovee the drama and how it ended!! :))! <3 suchh a fann!