Angels and Wormholes

Angels and Wormholes

53 Part Story 125K Reads 4.7K Votes
David Shultz By David_Shultz Completed

A star-faring religious cult has created an army of robotic zealots designed to follow holy scripture. As the robotic menace spreads across the galaxy, it takes prisoners to be 'excommunicated': hooked into a neural simulation of eternal torment.

Captain Rolland Barron leads the Sol Federation Starship Excalibur on a diplomatic mission. Cassia LaCroix is a wormhole hunter, earning a living scouring the galaxy for valuable tunnels through space-time. Prince Zoojin, a psychic alien from a distant galaxy, must prove himself worthy of the throne of Paxis Prime. The paths of these characters converge as they pursue their own motives, leading them towards the mechanical legion that is sweeping across the galaxy.

AUTHOR'S NOTE: this is an early draft of the novel. I am very grateful for your readership and your feedback, which I have taken into consideration for a major rewrite. The new novel is completely different. If you liked the book, then please look forward to the release of the finished novel.

MilesLasiter MilesLasiter May 18, 2016 12:42AM
I really like these headers. They provide a visually flavorful way to establish the scene.
MilesLasiter MilesLasiter May 18, 2016 12:49AM
I'm really intrigued by these Viziers. Rolland believes them to be charlatans, yet they are employed by a methodical government that seems to favor the logic of a situation over the human factor.
chrissy47 chrissy47 Jul 13, 2016 09:00AM
I love this story already. U have humour and u jumped into action. Also the way u have cut words so they are casual way of talking is brilliant. I have to do this with my sci fi epic. I will keep reading now😘
I want to make this planet populated for different kinds of creature for some hybrid creature
Architect_9 Architect_9 Nov 11, 2015 05:36AM
I was about to unfollow this because I wanted to start fresh on Wattpad...
                              
                              ...and then I actually read the opening and I was like, "A'ight, he's good at this."
ZoeWalsh ZoeWalsh Feb 20, 2015 02:45AM
This kinda reminds me of Battlestar Galactica, which is cool :).  But its incredibly detailed, and I love it!!!