Angels and Wormholes

Angels and Wormholes

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David Shultz By David_Shultz Completed

A star-faring religious cult has created an army of robotic zealots designed to follow holy scripture. As the robotic menace spreads across the galaxy, it takes prisoners to be 'excommunicated': hooked into a neural simulation of eternal torment.
    
    Captain Rolland Barron leads the Sol Federation Starship Excalibur on a diplomatic mission. Cassia LaCroix is a wormhole hunter, earning a living scouring the galaxy for valuable tunnels through space-time. Prince Zoojin, a psychic alien from a distant galaxy, must prove himself worthy of the throne of Paxis Prime. The paths of these characters converge as they pursue their own motives, leading them towards the mechanical legion that is sweeping across the galaxy.

I want to make this planet populated for different kinds of creature for some hybrid creature
Architect_9 Architect_9 Nov 11, 2015 05:36AM
I was about to unfollow this because I wanted to start fresh on Wattpad...
                                    
                                    ...and then I actually read the opening and I was like, "A'ight, he's good at this."
JillStroberger JillStroberger Feb 06, 2015 05:47PM
Great first chapter. Nice pace, characters feel real, and interesting turn of events.  I'm really excited to see where this goes :)
DannyMichelin DannyMichelin Aug 25, 2014 05:27AM
This is awesome! the prose is exciting and detailed without being pedantic
i love this chapter! this is exactly the type of books i like best.and the way you made that sudden total change of mood kept me riveted
EthanBrockwell EthanBrockwell Jul 03, 2014 03:30PM
If I were you(and looking to appease to all audiences) I would try to make the cross starships something more discrete. Not so blunt that it's Christian crusaders in The year 3013. Other than that it was a good start.