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Angels and Wormholes

Angels and Wormholes

143K Reads 5.6K Votes 53 Part Story
David Shultz By David_Shultz Completed

A star-faring religious cult has created an army of robotic zealots designed to follow holy scripture. As the robotic menace spreads across the galaxy, it takes prisoners to be 'excommunicated': hooked into a neural simulation of eternal torment.

Captain Rolland Barron leads the Sol Federation Starship Excalibur on a diplomatic mission. Cassia LaCroix is a wormhole hunter, earning a living scouring the galaxy for valuable tunnels through space-time. Prince Zoojin, a psychic alien from a distant galaxy, must prove himself worthy of the throne of Paxis Prime. The paths of these characters converge as they pursue their own motives, leading them towards the mechanical legion that is sweeping across the galaxy.

AUTHOR'S NOTE: this is an early draft of the novel. I am very grateful for your readership and your feedback, which I have taken into consideration for a major rewrite. The new novel is completely different. If you liked the book, then please look forward to the release of the finished novel.

InkWarfare InkWarfare Mar 29
I swear you were on some drug or the other when you thought of this
InkWarfare InkWarfare Mar 29
Terraformed in 1550C.E? MAYBE I'm a bit of a nerd but I'd really like details on that type of thing
Some of the words in this short story is quite deep.. just a thought..
MilesLasiter MilesLasiter May 18, 2016
I really like these headers. They provide a visually flavorful way to establish the scene.
MilesLasiter MilesLasiter May 18, 2016
I'm really intrigued by these Viziers. Rolland believes them to be charlatans, yet they are employed by a methodical government that seems to favor the logic of a situation over the human factor.
chrissy47 chrissy47 Jul 13, 2016
I love this story already. U have humour and u jumped into action. Also the way u have cut words so they are casual way of talking is brilliant. I have to do this with my sci fi epic. I will keep reading now😘