Angels and Wormholes

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David Shultz By David_Shultz Completed
A star-faring religious cult has created an army of robotic zealots designed to follow holy scripture. As the robotic menace spreads across the galaxy, it takes prisoners to be 'excommunicated': hooked into a neural simulation of eternal torment.
    Captain Rolland Barron leads the Sol Federation Starship Excalibur on a diplomatic mission. Cassia LaCroix is a wormhole hunter, earning a living scouring the galaxy for valuable tunnels through space-time. Prince Zoojin, a psychic alien from a distant galaxy, must prove himself worthy of the throne of Paxis Prime. The paths of these characters converge as they pursue their own motives, leading them towards the mechanical legion that is sweeping across the galaxy.
This kinda reminds me of Battlestar Galactica, which is cool :).  But its incredibly detailed, and I love it!!!
Great first chapter. Nice pace, characters feel real, and interesting turn of events.  I'm really excited to see where this goes :)
I wanna know the end to the monkey wedding story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is awesome! the prose is exciting and detailed without being pedantic
i love this chapter! this is exactly the type of books i like best.and the way you made that sudden total change of mood kept me riveted
"-they are of some distance place" I think you mean "distant"