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Esihle Loyiso Mpetha By EssoLloydMpetha Completed

My whole life just changed in one day. I was kidnapped by a scientist gone rogue. Experimented on with nanotechnology that could change the world as we know it. Not everyone survived these experiments.

My system rejected the nano treatment, and whenever this happened, the patient died. Somehow I survived. Now I have to find a way to save my friend and several others that were taken with me.

Things change when a new organization with intentions of taking all the power arises. I find that I have to work together with someone I thought was the enemy to save everybody. I learn the hard way that you can't save them all. My name is Shaun McGee and this is my story.

Best ranking so far #21 in Science Fiction

Credits to the owner of the picture from which I made a cover from

***Open for any critiques and ideas***

  • abilities
  • action
  • control
  • destruction
  • electrokinesis
  • esso
  • genetic-engineering
  • genetics
  • invisibility
  • superhuman
  • superpowers
  • superspeed
  • supervillain
  • telekinesis
  • teleporter
  • youngadultreads
Who knows? Maybe she wants to talk about something good, like...Yeah, I got nothing, he dead xD
Thats messed up. Thats like breaking his leg and then telling him to walk it off.
GeekyMadMan33 GeekyMadMan33 Sep 05, 2016
"Filled with mistakes" yeah right you are an amazing author, you are awesome, if anyone tells you no I will kill them and get away with it, and if I don't you'll be able to bale my out of jail because your going to be a famous author.
funtime17 funtime17 Jun 24, 2016
I love the discription, thpugh now its time to lose myself in the story itself
lizziebean17 lizziebean17 May 27, 2016
Question is that a real name of a teacher u had or have??🤓
Hippop75 Hippop75 Aug 21, 2016
You can really feel that he doesn't really like his mom. He calls her Mara.