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Esihle Loyiso Mpetha By EssoLloydMpetha Completed

My whole life just changed in one day. I was kidnapped by a scientist gone rogue. Experimented on with nanotechnology that could change the world as we know it. Not everyone survived these experiments.

My system rejected the nano treatment, and whenever this happened, the patient died. Somehow I survived. Now I have to find a way to save my friend and several others that were taken with me.

Things change when a new organization with intentions of taking all the power arises. I find that I have to work together with someone I thought was the enemy to save everybody. I learn the hard way that you can't save them all. My name is Shaun McGee and this is my story.

Best ranking so far #21 in Science Fiction

Credits to the owner of the picture from which I made a cover from

***Open for any critiques and ideas***

  • abilities
  • action
  • control
  • destruction
  • electrokinesis
  • esso
  • genetic-engineering
  • genetics
  • invisibility
  • sciencefiction
  • superhuman
  • superpowers
  • superspeed
  • supervillain
  • telekinesis
  • teleporter
  • youngadultreads
PhantomOwlet PhantomOwlet Apr 04, 2017
Who knows? Maybe she wants to talk about something good, like...Yeah, I got nothing, he dead xD
Gh0stwr1t3r2 Gh0stwr1t3r2 Mar 27, 2017
Thats messed up. Thats like breaking his leg and then telling him to walk it off.
Pithikos Pithikos Feb 05
nothin' gets ya sympathysin with da main like an unsympathetic teacher
“‘Cause, I dunno, it helps my hair see better I guess.” -Gregzilla
Lellie410 Lellie410 Feb 14
When I read his last name the first time I was like “Its high noon somewhere in the world.”
MidnightMoonMisty MidnightMoonMisty 7 days ago
Ok so is Shaun a boy or girl? Probably already know this but I just need to make sure