✅1️⃣ | Hypnosis Doesn't Work...

By kittyangelabdl

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Adelaide is a very smart girl; certainly smarter than anyone at her school. And she knows she's both too inte... More

1: Too Smart to be Hypnotised
2: I'm Only Playing Along
3: This Stuff's Just for Gullible Idiots
4: You Didn't Say the Trigger, It's Just a Fluke
5: If I Analyse, You Can't Hypnotise
6: Hypnosis is Just an Act
7: They're Only Words, They Can't Do Anything
8: I Don't Even Think Dunning Krueger is a Real Person
9: I Can Make My Own Decisions
10: Everything is Completely Normal
11: It's Easy to Resist When You're Expecting It
12: Freddy Must Have Been an Only Child
13: A Problem Shared is a Problem You Couldn't Solve By Yourself
14: When I Have the Right Answers, but the Teacher Disagrees
15: You can't Make Someone Else Do What You Want
16: I'll Always Know What's Real and What Isn't
17: It's All Just Pretending Anyway
18: I Don't Need Permission to Feel Anything
19: I Don't Believe in True Love, Either
20: They Pick Volunteers Who Enjoy Being Stared At
21: I See The Details Everyone Else Misses
22: Wake Up Feeling Refreshed and Awake
23: I'd Never Talk About Something Like That
24: There's Nothing to be Scared Of
25: I Always Think Before I Speak
26: I'm Always One Step Ahead
27: I'm Too Smart for This Shit
28: The Cure
29: I Can Use it to My Advantage
30: I Don't Really Need Your Help, But...
31: Truth is no Stranger than Fiction
32: I'm Sure This Will Help
33: Just Another Day Like Any Other
34: You Never Know it's Fake Until You Try
35: A Discovery
36: I Don't Care What Other People Think
37: There's So Many Chances to Resist
38: Everything's Easier After a Break
39: I Know Everything I Need to Know
40: I Don't Need Someone to Look Out For Me
41: Asking for Advice from Experts is a Sign of Intelligence
42: Simple Tasks, Easily Done
43: I Don't Need to Think About Every Detail
44: I Don't Always Need to be in Control
45: Everyone Should be Aware of Me
46: A Break
47: It's Just a Waiting Game
48: A Call
49: Asking for Help is an Act of Desperation
50: A Good Friend Wouldn't Need to Ask
51: Do I Look Like a Baby to You?
52: A Name is More Than Just a Word
53: You Don't Get Something for Nothing
54: There are Two Sides to Every Story...
55: ... and Mine is Always the Right One
56: The Easiest Choices are the Ones You Never Have to Make
57: I'm the One With All the Answers
58: I Know Exactly What I Want
59: I Only Get Nervous About Things That Really Matter
60: Nothing Surprises Me Now
61: It's Always Better to be Sure of Something
62: I Always Know Where I'm Going
63: I'm Calm and Rational When Facing Problems
64: Everything is so Easy for Me
65: I'm Like a Child With a New Toy
66: A Whole New World to Understand
67: A Place Where Nobody Knows Your Name
68: The Plan
69: You Need to be Smart to Really Understand Me
70: Confirmation
71: You Don't Need to Ask if I'm Alright
72: Everyone Will Make Sure I'm Happy
73: I Need to Explore the Possibilities
74: I Know When I Need to Ask for Help
75: If It Needs Doing, I've Done It
76: I Know I'm the Perfect Candidate
77: Everything's Going so Well
78: I Trust You to Take Care of Me
79: I Can Look After Myself
80: I'm Smart Enough to Listen to Mommy
81: Dissenting Opinion
82: She's Got My Best Interests at Heart
83: I Know Who I Can Trust
84: It's Just a Way to Keep me Calm
85: I Know What to Ask For
86: I Can Get Myself to Where I Need to Be
87: Intelligence is More Attractive than Appearance
88: Things Always Go Exactly How I Planned
89: I'll Never be Ashamed of My Gifts
90: A Delivery
91: Even Geniuses can do Stupid Things
92: What She Wants
93: I Can Trust Myself to Make the Right Choice
94: There Are Some Things I'd Never Say
95: I Say What I Mean and Mean What I Say
96: It Takes a Real Genius to Know When You're Wrong
97: I'm Always Grateful for a Helping Hand
98: Nobody Puts Me in a Corner
99: I'd Never Make a Deal With the Devil
100: In a Few Days I'll be Back to Normal
101: A Little Knowledge is my Secret Weapon
102: I Always Know What I Need to Do
103: I Don't Like Surprises, Except When I Do
104: Recruitment
105: Enjoying a Quiet Evening Together
106: When Life Gives Us Lemons, Let's Make Pie
107: The Most Wonderful Pie in the World, Ever
108: I'd Do Anything for Love, But Maybe Not That
109: I Know How I Want My Life to Go
110: The Best Laid Plan that Can't Go Wrong
111: What I Do is My Choice
112: There's One Game I'll Always Win
113: Having Fun is the Only Part that Matters
114: There are Things I'll Never Do, and Some I Will
115: I Want to be Useful to Everyone Who Helped Me
116: Smart Enough to Enjoy the Good Days
117: I've Got a Plan and I Know What I'm Doing
118: It Doesn't Mean Anything, it Was an Accident
119: Some Games I Can Never Win
120: Everything I Do is My Own Choice
121: I Always Know What's Going On
122: Today I Have to Act My Age
123: I Know Where I Should Be
124: I Can Plan the Best Laid Plans
125: It Takes a Team to Make Perfect Plans
126: Everything I Could Possibly Want
127: Nobody Tells Me What I Can't Like
128: There Are Things I'd Never Ask For
129: Everything I'd Ever Wanted
130: Just a Little Accident
131: The Important Thing is What I Know
132: Telling Everyone What They Need to Know
133: Too Smart to Take Hypnosis Lightly
134: Watching Out for the Details That Matter
135: Satisfied
136: Starting How I Mean to Go On
137: I'll Show Everyone Who I Really Am
138: I Can Always Make a Good First Impression
139: It Can't Hurt if it's Only a Game
140: My Friends Will Stop Before it Goes Too Far
141: Too Smart to be Misunderstood
142: Parenting
143: I'll Take Any Chance to Get Back to Normal
144: If You Know the Answers, You Don't Need to Think About It
145: Mommy Will Understand What I Really Want
146: Always Planning for Unexpected Possibilities
147: Pretty Things Aren't Just for Babies
148: Enjoying A Balanced Diet
149: It's My Party, I Can Focus on the Fun Things
150: I've Got More Friends Than I Can Count
151: I Always Know Exactly What I'm Doing
152: I Know When I've Had Enough
153: Nobody Can Understand My Thoughts
154: I've Got Someone I Can Rely On
155: I Got All the Gifts I Ever Wanted
156: Everything Will Seem Better in the Morning
157: I Can Negotiate for the Things I Want
158: The Next Day of my Adult Life
159: I Always Know What to Expect
160: I'm Always Involved When Making Plans
161: Smart Enough to Do What Mommy Says
162: I Can Do So Many Things Without Thinking
163: I'm Escaping Those Suggestions Already
164: I Could Take Back Control Whenever I Want
165: Avoid Problems by Thinking Ahead
166: If I Can Pretend, Then I Can Escape
168: Nobody Could Tell I'm Not an Adult
169: It's Normal to be Excited in a New Place
170: A Decision I Made a Long Time Ago
171: So Many Achievements to be Proud Of
172: I Can Act My Age
173: I Can Take Care of Myself
174: I'd Go Back to Normal If You Let Me
175: I Can Do It By Myself
176: I Know When to Tell the Truth
177: I've Got All the Answers
178: I Know What I Want
179: I Always Know What's Waiting for Me
180: My Problem-Solving Skills are Excellent
181: I'm Solving My Own Problems
182: I've Already Found a Way Out
183: I'll Let You Know What I Want
184: Conditions
185: I Know How the Story's Supposed to Go
186: I Can Make People Take Me Seriously
187: I Do What I Want
188: Showing My Best Side for Someone I Like
189: To Play's the Thing That Matters
190: All the Things I Love to Do
191: The First Morning of the Rest of My Life
192: I Found a Way to End This
193: At Last I Can Choose to Act My Age
194: I Could if I Wanted To
195: The Best Way to Prepare for My Exams
196: I Know How to Impress Him
197: Dressing Up for the Occasion
198: I Don't Need to Learn Any Lessons
199: Every Class is Easy for Me
200: The Most Important Thing in My World

167: Getting Myself Ready to Escape

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By kittyangelabdl

Author's Note: Only a short chapter today, but I hope you enjoy it. And thanks again to Jordan for the support on Patreon.

Is this what you were expecting to happen? The hardest part of writing, for me, is figuring out which hints the readers might have noticed, so that I can make sure the surprises and twists are timed properly. I keep checking on TVtropes to see if my stories have a page yet, because the insight into what the fans are thinking (and seeing which details you think are noteworthy) would make it so much easier. So far the only one I've seen is Mr Hook's Big Black Box (and the published books), but I can keep on hoping!

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Adi stared at all the clothes Toni was pulling out of the closet. Summer dresses, or smart clothes that might pass for a school uniform, or even a caricature of a business suit. She couldn't wait to try them all on, and after a few seconds she realised she was standing there with her mouth hanging open. Deep inside, she knew that she wasn't going to spend long pretending to be a grown-up, because as soon as she got changed the suggestions would fade and she could escape. But when she saw the number of different outfits she could choose from, she couldn't help wishing that she could play along for a while.

She told herself that was the hypnosis speaking. Toni had told her to be super excited about playing dress-up, and she was more excited than she'd ever been about anything. Maybe even more excited than she'd been about unwrapping her presents, and that was the most fun she'd ever had. Or more fun than trying to play video games with Toni, while she was too young to properly. Or... She realised that there were dozens of moments in the last few months that were the most fun she'd ever had, but that didn't change the point. She was excited because Toni had told her to be, and she knew that she had to go back to normal as soon as she got changed. This joy was something she would allow herself to enjoy while it lasted, but she wouldn't let it carry on too long no matter how much she wanted to.

"Okay, Adelaide? Are you ready to get changed?"

Adelaide nodded, eyes wide and gazing at all the beautiful clothes. She barely even noticed herself wetting a little as she heard her name.

"And you're going to be a good girl for Mommy?" Toni continued. "You don't want to spoil the game, do you?"

This time Adelaide shook her head. She didn't want to ruin the game. She was going to have fun as long as it lasted. And it took a lot of effort to remind herself that she was going to be a big girl again soon. Hearing her name still gave her an incredible need to please Mommy, and to do what she was told, but that didn't make too much difference. She was going to do her best to be a good girl while she got changed anyway, and enjoy all those wonderful big girl clothes, and after that she was sure she'd be able to feel a little more grown up.

"Well then, be a good girl for me. You know that the hypnotic trigger I used isn't as strong as the baby behaviours you give yourself, and it doesn't last as long. So I want you to repeat those baby behaviours back to me, and make sure that you can enjoy pretending to be a big girl just as much any time we decide that you should play dress up. And don't worry about the big words, because even if you're a baby, you'll be able to use big words when an adult's helping you to choose some new baby behaviours."

Adi grinned, and nodded in excitement. She knew that trying to make herself more grown up again didn't usually work. But this time, just giving her permission to use big words in one special case, was bound to be different because if helped her to be littler in the long run. She was so excited to try it and see, and the words tumbled out of her mouth so fast that she tripped over her tongue a few times as she started babbling: "If I was a baby I'd get super excited about playing dress up. If I was a baby I'd love the feeling of..."

It worked! She could say all the big words she wanted, and it felt amazing after a day of not being able to. Adi didn't even pay attention as she repeated what Mommy had told her to say, maybe exaggerating or getting carried away a little bit here and there. She was so excited about all the things she was going to feel, but seeing Mommy nodding proudly as she did what she'd been told; that was the greatest reward she could imagine.

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