✅1️⃣ | Hypnosis Doesn't Work...

By kittyangelabdl

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Adelaide is a very smart girl; certainly smarter than anyone at her school. And she knows she's both too inte... More

1: Too Smart to be Hypnotised
2: I'm Only Playing Along
3: This Stuff's Just for Gullible Idiots
4: You Didn't Say the Trigger, It's Just a Fluke
5: If I Analyse, You Can't Hypnotise
6: Hypnosis is Just an Act
7: They're Only Words, They Can't Do Anything
8: I Don't Even Think Dunning Krueger is a Real Person
9: I Can Make My Own Decisions
10: Everything is Completely Normal
11: It's Easy to Resist When You're Expecting It
12: Freddy Must Have Been an Only Child
13: A Problem Shared is a Problem You Couldn't Solve By Yourself
14: When I Have the Right Answers, but the Teacher Disagrees
15: You can't Make Someone Else Do What You Want
16: I'll Always Know What's Real and What Isn't
17: It's All Just Pretending Anyway
18: I Don't Need Permission to Feel Anything
19: I Don't Believe in True Love, Either
20: They Pick Volunteers Who Enjoy Being Stared At
21: I See The Details Everyone Else Misses
22: Wake Up Feeling Refreshed and Awake
23: I'd Never Talk About Something Like That
24: There's Nothing to be Scared Of
25: I Always Think Before I Speak
26: I'm Always One Step Ahead
27: I'm Too Smart for This Shit
28: The Cure
29: I Can Use it to My Advantage
30: I Don't Really Need Your Help, But...
31: Truth is no Stranger than Fiction
32: I'm Sure This Will Help
33: Just Another Day Like Any Other
34: You Never Know it's Fake Until You Try
35: A Discovery
36: I Don't Care What Other People Think
37: There's So Many Chances to Resist
38: Everything's Easier After a Break
39: I Know Everything I Need to Know
40: I Don't Need Someone to Look Out For Me
41: Asking for Advice from Experts is a Sign of Intelligence
42: Simple Tasks, Easily Done
43: I Don't Need to Think About Every Detail
44: I Don't Always Need to be in Control
45: Everyone Should be Aware of Me
46: A Break
47: It's Just a Waiting Game
48: A Call
49: Asking for Help is an Act of Desperation
50: A Good Friend Wouldn't Need to Ask
51: Do I Look Like a Baby to You?
52: A Name is More Than Just a Word
53: You Don't Get Something for Nothing
54: There are Two Sides to Every Story...
55: ... and Mine is Always the Right One
56: The Easiest Choices are the Ones You Never Have to Make
57: I'm the One With All the Answers
58: I Know Exactly What I Want
59: I Only Get Nervous About Things That Really Matter
60: Nothing Surprises Me Now
61: It's Always Better to be Sure of Something
62: I Always Know Where I'm Going
63: I'm Calm and Rational When Facing Problems
64: Everything is so Easy for Me
65: I'm Like a Child With a New Toy
66: A Whole New World to Understand
67: A Place Where Nobody Knows Your Name
68: The Plan
69: You Need to be Smart to Really Understand Me
70: Confirmation
71: You Don't Need to Ask if I'm Alright
72: Everyone Will Make Sure I'm Happy
73: I Need to Explore the Possibilities
74: I Know When I Need to Ask for Help
75: If It Needs Doing, I've Done It
76: I Know I'm the Perfect Candidate
77: Everything's Going so Well
78: I Trust You to Take Care of Me
79: I Can Look After Myself
80: I'm Smart Enough to Listen to Mommy
81: Dissenting Opinion
82: She's Got My Best Interests at Heart
83: I Know Who I Can Trust
84: It's Just a Way to Keep me Calm
85: I Know What to Ask For
86: I Can Get Myself to Where I Need to Be
87: Intelligence is More Attractive than Appearance
88: Things Always Go Exactly How I Planned
89: I'll Never be Ashamed of My Gifts
90: A Delivery
91: Even Geniuses can do Stupid Things
92: What She Wants
93: I Can Trust Myself to Make the Right Choice
94: There Are Some Things I'd Never Say
95: I Say What I Mean and Mean What I Say
96: It Takes a Real Genius to Know When You're Wrong
97: I'm Always Grateful for a Helping Hand
98: Nobody Puts Me in a Corner
99: I'd Never Make a Deal With the Devil
100: In a Few Days I'll be Back to Normal
101: A Little Knowledge is my Secret Weapon
102: I Always Know What I Need to Do
104: Recruitment
105: Enjoying a Quiet Evening Together
106: When Life Gives Us Lemons, Let's Make Pie
107: The Most Wonderful Pie in the World, Ever
108: I'd Do Anything for Love, But Maybe Not That
109: I Know How I Want My Life to Go
110: The Best Laid Plan that Can't Go Wrong
111: What I Do is My Choice
112: There's One Game I'll Always Win
113: Having Fun is the Only Part that Matters
114: There are Things I'll Never Do, and Some I Will
115: I Want to be Useful to Everyone Who Helped Me
116: Smart Enough to Enjoy the Good Days
117: I've Got a Plan and I Know What I'm Doing
118: It Doesn't Mean Anything, it Was an Accident
119: Some Games I Can Never Win
120: Everything I Do is My Own Choice
121: I Always Know What's Going On
122: Today I Have to Act My Age
123: I Know Where I Should Be
124: I Can Plan the Best Laid Plans
125: It Takes a Team to Make Perfect Plans
126: Everything I Could Possibly Want
127: Nobody Tells Me What I Can't Like
128: There Are Things I'd Never Ask For
129: Everything I'd Ever Wanted
130: Just a Little Accident
131: The Important Thing is What I Know
132: Telling Everyone What They Need to Know
133: Too Smart to Take Hypnosis Lightly
134: Watching Out for the Details That Matter
135: Satisfied
136: Starting How I Mean to Go On
137: I'll Show Everyone Who I Really Am
138: I Can Always Make a Good First Impression
139: It Can't Hurt if it's Only a Game
140: My Friends Will Stop Before it Goes Too Far
141: Too Smart to be Misunderstood
142: Parenting
143: I'll Take Any Chance to Get Back to Normal
144: If You Know the Answers, You Don't Need to Think About It
145: Mommy Will Understand What I Really Want
146: Always Planning for Unexpected Possibilities
147: Pretty Things Aren't Just for Babies
148: Enjoying A Balanced Diet
149: It's My Party, I Can Focus on the Fun Things
150: I've Got More Friends Than I Can Count
151: I Always Know Exactly What I'm Doing
152: I Know When I've Had Enough
153: Nobody Can Understand My Thoughts
154: I've Got Someone I Can Rely On
155: I Got All the Gifts I Ever Wanted
156: Everything Will Seem Better in the Morning
157: I Can Negotiate for the Things I Want
158: The Next Day of my Adult Life
159: I Always Know What to Expect
160: I'm Always Involved When Making Plans
161: Smart Enough to Do What Mommy Says
162: I Can Do So Many Things Without Thinking
163: I'm Escaping Those Suggestions Already
164: I Could Take Back Control Whenever I Want
165: Avoid Problems by Thinking Ahead
166: If I Can Pretend, Then I Can Escape
167: Getting Myself Ready to Escape
168: Nobody Could Tell I'm Not an Adult
169: It's Normal to be Excited in a New Place
170: A Decision I Made a Long Time Ago
171: So Many Achievements to be Proud Of
172: I Can Act My Age
173: I Can Take Care of Myself
174: I'd Go Back to Normal If You Let Me
175: I Can Do It By Myself
176: I Know When to Tell the Truth
177: I've Got All the Answers
178: I Know What I Want
179: I Always Know What's Waiting for Me
180: My Problem-Solving Skills are Excellent
181: I'm Solving My Own Problems
182: I've Already Found a Way Out
183: I'll Let You Know What I Want
184: Conditions
185: I Know How the Story's Supposed to Go
186: I Can Make People Take Me Seriously
187: I Do What I Want
188: Showing My Best Side for Someone I Like
189: To Play's the Thing That Matters
190: All the Things I Love to Do
191: The First Morning of the Rest of My Life
192: I Found a Way to End This
193: At Last I Can Choose to Act My Age
194: I Could if I Wanted To
195: The Best Way to Prepare for My Exams
196: I Know How to Impress Him
197: Dressing Up for the Occasion
198: I Don't Need to Learn Any Lessons
199: Every Class is Easy for Me
200: The Most Important Thing in My World

103: I Don't Like Surprises, Except When I Do

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By kittyangelabdl

"You've not told me the whole story," Adi finally plucked up the courage to challenge her best friend – or should she be thinking of her as a girlfriend now? – while she was helping out with some part for one of the bikes. Toni had all the skills she needed, and the strength to pull, lift, or twist whatever parts needed adjusting, but when it was a case of needing an extra hand to hold something, Adi was happy to lend one of hers.

"What story?" Toni grunted, not taking her eyes off the tiny nut she was adjusting.

"I'm staying here so long, and Mom hasn't protested at all. You're not telling me something."

"Umm... yeah. Your mom loves you, you know? She wants you to be happy."

"Yeah, but she'd be so worried about me, just from not seeing me for so long. I know her better than that."

"She kind of guessed we're... whatever this might be. I think she wants to give us some space to work it out."

"If that was true I'd be in for important mother-daughter talks, and a lecture about remembering not to agree to things just because it's easier, and all that stuff. Seriously, Babe. What have you told Mom, that she's okay with me being here? Does she know there's no adult supervision?"

"I might not have mentioned that part. I think maybe she assumed Uncle Walt was going to be here for the whole month, certainly before Dad went away again. But..."

"Please. I know you've done so much for me, but this is worrying me. I'm having a great time, but I'm constantly waiting for the other shoe to drop. Where's the catch? Tell me, please."

"Spoilers, Babe. It's more fun if you don't know."

"I don't like surprises. Please, tell me."

Toni turned her head at last, and finally their eyes met. And when she saw that Adi was serious, she put her tools down on the bench and gave her full attention.

"Okay. Britney will probably kill me. But they're setting up a surprise party for you. It wouldn't have taken so long, but there's your brother to deal with as well. He needs to learn, and properly understand, that he can't just say your name at random. It's like an intense discipline course, based off some of the tricks they use in military boot camp, coupled with some stuff that's almost like hypnosis but buried in conversation. It's a lot of effort, but I reckon they got a good chance of getting even the most rebellious kid to behave on just one issue. But they needed you to be somewhere else while they did it."

"That's like the biggest birthday present ever," Adi chuckled. "But... a surprise party? Doesn't sound like my kind of thing. Are you sure it'll be fun?"

"That's another reason. Britney wants you to be happy, you know? But she's not sure what you want. So they're making this big plan to make sure that no matter how you feel on the day, you'll get exactly the kind of party you're in the mood for. And I've double-checked everything to make sure you can enjoy it without getting turned into a baby, unless that's what you really want."

"No, I'm not going to–"

A handful of seconds, and Toni moved back again. Adi giggled just a little, and blushed as she commented: "You really know how to shut me up, Babe."

"And I know you're not going to ask to be a baby. You never asked for this, and you're avoiding that file now, right? So it'll wear off soon. But it's given them some ideas, and I really think you'll like some of them. And I promise you, you'll have the choice on the day. But please, act surprised?"

"Anything for you, Babe."

"Anything?"

"Anything.

"Then... could you pass the pliers? I really want to get this finished today."




Author's Note: This whole sequence from the end of school up to the birthday party was supposed to be a single chapter, but in the end I broke it up into smaller bits. Hope you're enjoying it; and for the people not yet on Patreon, I wonder if you can see where it's going. This certainly surprised me when I was writing it!

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