KARNA HIS MOTHER'S SOUL

By shylpeter8

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what if he was raised in Kailash.What if he is Gandharinandan. What... More

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BIRTH OF YUDHISHTHIR
GANDHARI'S AGONY
CHAPTER 3
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER 6
CHAPTER 7
CHAPTER 8
CHAPTER 9
CHAPTER 10
CHAPTER 12
CHAPTER 13
CHAPTER 14
CHAPTER 15
CHAPTER 16
CHAPTER 17
CHAPTER 18
CHAPTER 19
CHAPTER 20
CHAPTER 21
CHAPTER 22
CHAPTER 23
CHAPTER 24
CHAPTER 25
CHAPTER 26
CHAPTER 27
CHAPTER 28
CHAPTER 29
CHAPTER 30
CHAPTER 31
CHAPTER 32
CHAPTER 33
CHAPTER 34
CHAPTER 35
CHAPTER 36

CHAPTER 11

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Tournament was through and the citizens were heading to there homes while the visitors who planned on departing the next day, everything was arranged for there stay and other kings stayed inorder to ask for the hand in marriage for there daughters to the warrior who emerged the winner.

"Since you are our friend now will you mind showing us your face"Duryodhan being curious asked for he wanted to see the warrior behind the mask who defeated Dronacharya favourite disciple

He was waiting anxiously when Karna removed the mask covering him revealing his handsome face which has a sun glow and mark on his forehead. Even Nakul who is mentioned to be handsome couldn't stand a chance Infront of his beauty. A gasp was heard followed by murmuring seeing his beauty and female were awestruck they couldn't believe  a man with such beauty exist.

Every girl  jaw dropped seeing his beauty and every male were jealous of his beauty and the attention he grabbed from both genders. Duryodhan smiled seeing his face and how male were looking at his with envy "a perfect combination of beauty and exceptional warrior ''

They were intrupted by a palace maid who announce of the queen urgency of there presence in her personal chamber.

"Brathashre use you've made me forgot mother send me to call all of you, now she will pull my ears" complained Dushassan

"How is that Jeshta mistake, your the one who came and kept silent hear, your becoming forgetful I wish Mata will pull your ears hard until it fall down"responded Vikrana

"Your the one talking, let me show you how your ears fall down before mine" answered Dushassan heading on his direction

"Jeshta please save me ,look at bratha he wants to cut me beautiful ears"complained Vikrana hiding behind Dushassan

Duryodhan: Have you both forgotten Mata has summoned us?

"Oh no! both exclaimed running towards the palace

"I really pity you Suyo,how do you stay with all this monkeys?i'l come for training from you, maybe in my next birth i'l be given 100 siblings like you" expressed aswatthama with a fake pity

"A you mocking me mitr?infact where is the other donkey? asked Duryodhan

"Your right I haven't seen Shon hope he is ok"expressed in worry

But they were intrupted with an eagle which flew and settle on the shoulder of Rudra. It was carrying paper on its mouth which Rudra retrieve reading it, his face changed to seriousness which he covered immediately though it didn't go unnoticed to the company he had.

"Hmm I need to go somewhere now but don't worry i'l return before you know it"told Karna

"Is there any problem, maybe we can be of help"expressed Duryodhan followed by Aswatthama nodding to what he said

"it's nothing I can't handle but don't worry if I need any help i'l call of you, let me take my leave, send my greetings to Maharani and Maharaj. Greetings."he told closing his eyes summoning his magical horse which appeared bending his head to his master.

He vanished Infront of them which left them astonished, they rubbed there eyes to see if it wasn't a dream and it didn't fail them. Sighing they head to Maharani chamber which Duryodhan was welcomed by his ears being pulled by his mother.

"Mata what mistake have I committed? my ears will fall down then I won't bring a daughter in -law for you for who will want a husband who has no ears, please Mata spare it"told Duryodhan pouting

His youngest siblings were looking them interestingly holding a chuckle which was about to erupt from them.

"You haven't changed , didn't you miss your Mata Duryodhan "Questioned Gandhari caressing the face of her eldest son

"I missed you so much Mata"Duryodhan answered emotionally embracing his mother

"Aswatthama why a you standing there come in"called Gandhari

"Greetings Maharani"he greeted kneeling down to touch her feet.

Kauravas looked at him there eyes widen waiting for there mother response who didn't fail them making them erupt in laughter seeing Aswatthama

"Who calls his mother Maharani, call me Mata for your not different from Duryodhan ,and where is Rudra I thought you both were coming with him"told Gandhari pulling his ears

"Hmm Mata we were coming together but he received a message he said it was urgent and he went but don't worry tomorrow he will be here"Told Duryodhan after looking at Aswatthama remembering what happened infront of there eyes which Gandhari nodded dismissing them not showing her sadness

Ok now all of you go to your father's chamber visit him and please give him a chance ,i'l be waiting for you all. After sometime everyone started gathering in the field where the dinner was organized which was a joyous event  for  they cracked jokes among themselves but it was destroyed by the statement of Bheem.

"Duryodhan it's good you haven't invited that sutputra to join us for dinner, better you've realised his place that he's good only in driving chariots but don't worry we will employ him as Arjun chariot driver so that he'l know his place is on the foot of Arjun. What did he think ,just by raising a weapon everyone becomes a warrior, let brother becomes a king then we will show him his place, he was cursed that's why he's born from a cursed womb of a Suta how can he think he'l dine with the princes" spatted Bheem which the Pandav nodded agreeing with him

"So you mean any person born in a womb of low class woman is cursed"asked Duryodhan in angered

"What else should be the problem though how will you know this when you yourself your a bad omen"questioned Bheem

Everyone looked at Gandhari who was fuming holding her hands in a tight fist, they tried to stop Bheem but him who was enjoying degrading Duryodhan Infront the visitors was enjoying the attention he was getting

"Oh Panduputra Bheem then tell me from which royal woman is your Kakashree Vidur born"Duryodhan dropped the bomb ,Vidur felt like chilled water has been poured on him

"Duryodhan! I'll kill you"replied Bheem standing up like a mad bull ready to attack

"How dare you Panduputra Bheem, how dare you insult a woman womb but I don't blame you ,I blame your mother who failed to be your first teacher and never punished you when you did any mistake, but don't worry i'l punish you in a way that you will never insult any woman"declared Gandhari in anger

"But jiji"Kunti has just started to intrupt when she was cut with Gandhari in the middle

"Don't even dare speak Kunti ,you failed as a mother and remain quite when am talking, am still the Queen of hastinapur "reprimanded Gandhari

She was intrupted with an eagle which flew and settle Infront of her with a paper on its mouth. Taking it she read a message which cooled her temper and soothed her heart and a smile covered her face everyone was wondering what's the message was all about.

"Brathashre can you please express the beauty of Rudra in your words"asked Dushassan

"Hmm! Why do you want to embarrass Suyo?him with expressing anything in words it's a no, he's only good with his mace"mocked Aswatthama

"He has a wide forehead and gorgeous hair which makes him extremely beautiful,sun like resplendence, moon like gentleness, typical masculine physique,large chest and lion like velour his beauty is incomparable "he explained glaring at Aswatthama while other occupants were looking at him shockingly

"Bheem make sure tomorrow the compound is clean arrange everything for my younger son arrival and if anyone helps you they should be ready to face my wrath and let me not finding you eating anything until the next day, and Duryodhan will be the one who will be watching you"declared Gandhari taking her leave

Kauravus couldn't held a chuckle erupting from them and neither the elders or Pandavas could do anything in fear of Gandhari. They took there leave together with Dhristarashtra awaiting for tomorrow arrival to welcome the youngest member of Kuru family



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