[This OC and review contains themes of sexual abuse and suicide, if you're uncomfortable with any of those themes, I suggest overlooking this review.]
[Please note that I ask a lot of questions throughout the review, you by no means have to answer them, they are simply to get you thinking more in-depth about your character. Enjoy!]
Fandom: Original. It follows a group of agents in Skotos, a village mostly populated with people who have been wronged by humanity.
[How did Skotos become mostly populated with people who have been wronged? Is it seen as a 'haven' for these people, if that's the right word to use.]
One day, while Skotos agents were doing their thing and trying (keyword: trying) to educate people about the horrible things they were doing and why they should stop it, they discovered this organization about the Angels.
[What is their thing? Going door to door? School visits? Or do they whip out a bell and go 'Hear me, Hear me'. What do the general population think about the agents, are they seen as a nuisance.
I'm almost certain that this will get covered in the story or whatever you have planned for him, but just in case you ain't.
How did they discover the Angels? Where did the Angels originate from? Where did their core beliefs come from?]
The Angels were trying to promote humanity's sick things by saying that the victims deserved to be mistreated and even insisted that not only that humanity should not show pity for the victims, but they should also even treat the victims more harshly.
[The Angels, huh? You've managed to pick a name that shouldn't fit but fits so bloody well. Congratulations.]
To counter this, the head elder of Skotos formed a team of Skotos agents called Squad A ... but the Angels wiped them out.
[How does one stop the Angels? Is it the matter of exposing the Angel's wrongdoings, or do they have to go out at kill every single one/just the leaders? Can some of the Angels be made to realise what they are trying to preach is wrong?]
This continued down the line, through generation and generation and the story takes place where "Squad I" is sent out to hopefully stop the Angels. My OC is in Squad I.
[Getting some serious Templar and Assassin vibes here.]
Full Name: [High Priest] Cassius Kumar
Name Meaning: Cassius means "vain" since he is obsessed with his flaws. Kumar means "prince," which is pretty ironic considering that he's been poor all his life (though this is the 8th most common Indian surname, so ...)
[Love me a bit of well-placed irony.]
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Asexual Demiromantic
[That's a new one, makes sense with his story.]
Species: Human
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