Dedicated to _indie for the idea, and let me tell you... she is pretty talented so you might wanna check out her stuff.
Also, i keep forgetting to say this, but thank you so much for 1k reads. I never would of thought that i would get this many reads. EVER. like on anything. So thanks so much!!!!!! I'm dying. But anyway here's number #19 i think:
Some fan fics use the same words, or action, or emotion more times then necessary. So i'm gonna go ahead and start...
Smirking- You know... He smirks after every sentence. I mean it's pretty hot when guys smirk. But still. Even the girl smirks sometimes but mostly the guys. (if you don't know what a smirk is, literally search up Damon Salvatore gif and voila. He is the epitome of smirking)
Girl: I got a bad grade on my final
Boy: that's terrible *smirks*
Girl: My parents got into a car crash and died
Boy: I'm so sorry *smirks*
Girl: Your parents were in the car too
Boy: Fuck *smirks*
Girl: Stop smirking
Boy: *smirks*
Girl: I'm done. We're over
Boy: no babe come back *smirks*
Help, my mind can only take so much.
Flushing- The guy compliments her, she flushes, the guy calls her an 'ugly little ho-burger who no one likes' the bitch is still there flushing the dalm toilet. That makes so much sense, when i get a boyfriend and he comes over I'm gonna take him to the bathroom.
Bf: Nice bathroom
Me: *Flushes toilet*
Bf: Um why did you flush the toilet
Me: because you complimented my bathroom
Bf: Oh,
Me: *flushes toilet*
Bf: why..
Me: you're cute when you're nervous.
This, my friends is why i'm still single
Kissing actions:
My lips crashed onto his- this type of kissing depends on what type of story i'm reading. If i'm really caught up into it, and it's really good, then i don't mind how the characters kiss. BUT if the characters lips crash every five seconds, then we need a freaking doctor in the room
Our tongues fought for dominance- This is called personification, where you give something that is non human, human characteristics. So in this case, the writer is giving two tongues the traits of UFC wrestlers.
His lips melted onto mine- Dayummmm girl you hot. You so hot you causing boys to melt on your mouth. You so hot, you a nerd.
I literally can not think of anymore of over used things in fan fic. I need to go over them some more, so i'll do a part 2 :) Kay thanks again for 1k reads you guys are amazingly awesomeeee
