Love At First Sight

Introduction

(a/n: I know that Syracuse isn't an actual Magcon event. I live near Syracuse so that's why I used it)

Hey, my name is Brooke. I'm 14 and in
love with Magcon (especially Hayes Grier). I've had a hard life with some deaths that have happened in my family. Hayes and the other boys have saved me through it. And for a reward, I get to go to Magcon with my best friend, Julia.

*flashback*
Today was November 7th. The day I finally turn 14. I wake up and walk out to the living room see my best friend, Julia, and my mom talking.

"Julia? What are you doing here?" I ask groggily.
"Brooke! Happy birthday! We have a huge surprise for you."

My mom has a envelope in her hand and Julia has a present next to her. Julia gives me the present and I open it. It contains a Magcon phone case and a Hayes T-shirt.

"Julia, I can't believe this! I love you so much! Thank you!" I hug her.
"Okay, Brooke, here's the big surprise." My mom said.

I take the envelope and open it. I see a ticket with the words MAGCON VIP SYRACUSE, NY JANUARY 11TH-12TH.

I stare at the ticket. Not believing my eyes. I start to cry.

"Oh my god mom! Thank you so much!" I hug my mom and don't want to let go.
"This is a reward for dealing with the things that have been going on lately with our family."

I look over at Julia. She's holding up a ticket as well.

"OH MY GOD WE GET TO MEET THE MAGCON BOYS!"

I scream and run to Julia and we are both fangirling. The usual.

*end of flashback*

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So, what do you think so far? I know it's only an introduction but I still wanna hear opinions!
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