Fairy Tail FanFic - The Ice Dragon

REWRITE! - Prologue

Hey guys, long time no see! 
As some of you may be aware (I don't know where/how/to who the post I sent out went to, but long story short, this fanfiction is getting a rewrite! There were far to many typos and mistakes and my characters were too flimsy, and I was basically a 14 year old with an ipod when I first started writing it. 
Annnnyyyhow, I'm trying to make it better, the chapters a better length and the story, a little more interesting (I'm probably still going to fail but hey ho, it's all for fun right?) 

MAKE SURE YOU TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK :D

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Character Profile

Name: Hailee Dracia
Age: 17
Magic: Ice Dragon Slayer with the ability to use Equip magic.
Height: 5”9
Appearance: Pale skin,  sky-blue long hair with a large side fringe, slightly curly, icy blue eyes, large blue diamond on the outside of both thighs, upper forearms and two smaller triangular stripes on her right cheek. Leg and arm markings are always covered by white bandages, right cheek is covered by her fringe. Usual clothes are denim shorts/black pleated skirt and a baggy white open shoulder shirt/denim bralet, with over the knee black/white socks and knee high boots.                            
Interests: Art, Weaponry, and Magic.
Dislikes: Heat, Crowds, Dancing.
Personality and Background: Hailee was raised by an ice dragon named Skylar. The two were incredibly close, Skylar taught her everything and living with the dragon honed her senses to inhuman levels. However, it has made her unable to easily socialise with other people, and she lacks basic understanding for how to interact with others. She distrusts most other humans, blaming them all for the loss of Skylar and being unable to completely identify with them. She has a short tempter, and doesn’t have any qualms with dispatching someone or something, and has killed many rouge mages and criminals while hunting for Skylar, for no reason than other get what she was after. The Council of mages actually has a bounty of 50,000 on her head, but all that’s known about her is that she is an ice dragon slayer, which she now keeps quiet about her identity to stay anonymous.  She will look at situations like a dragon would, not a human, calculating the benefits for her.
 However, after joining Fairy Tail, Hailee does start to slowly change.  Since Skylar left, Hailee has been admittedly incredibly lonely. Lucy tries to teach her how to behave around others, and after a week or two she has become good friends with Lucy, Grey and Natsu, her loneliness causing her to be desperate for someone to be close too.  She’s also very self-critical, and wants to try and fit in, as the other Dragon Slayers had. She acts similar to a child who hasn’t really got the hang of politeness, saying what the thinks, and sometimes accidentally causing offense. She doesn’t quite trust the other members yet, but she acts as nice as she can around them. Battle however or hostility however, changes her back to her draconic self.    


Prologue:
“What was that?! Speak up!” Hailee snarled, inches from the mages face.
“Nat-Natsu Dr-Dragneel” He choked, her frozen, scaled hands cutting off his air.
“Where is he?” She hissed calmly, her grip tightening slightly.
“The guild. Fairy-“ he started coughing fiercely, his lips a light shade of violet.
“Go on.” Hailee commanded, relaxing her grip just a little. The mage inhaled sharply, and took a few deep breaths before continuing.
“Fairy Tail. With two others.” He gasped.
 Hailee released him; he slumped to a heap on the floor, grasping his throat which was covered in ice burns from the extreme cold of her scales.  She turned away from him, contemplating this new information. It did conform with her previous data. A dragon slayer, famous throughout the whole region due to his dragon father Igneel. The location and fact that there were two other slayers with him was new information however. She would waste no more time hunting false leads of maggots pretending they knew of the dragons,  she would find him and she would confront him. She would find Skylar.
“Your information was of help, just. However, you have witnessed my appearance and you know what I am, which could have a negative effect on my continued search for my mother. You’re pathetic scum anyway, thief. I doubt your discontinued existence would be to the detriment of humanity.” Hailee concluded, still with her back to the broken mage.
“My… my discontinued what…?!” He gawped, his eyes wipe as he started to scramble away, pulling himself up against the wall she has used to corner him. He let out a blood curdling cry as a large spear of ice pierced his stomach and embedded itself in the wall behind him. He hung limp, like an abandoned puppet, blood staining the ice dark red. Hailee took what may be of use to her, a steel sword she could enchant, some gold, and headed off towards her new goal.