Hello! I just wanted to let everyone know that I will be updating, I have not abandoned this story. I want this chapter to be extra-long, very long, actually. There's a lot of things and scenes I want to add that I forgot to put in the previous chapters, simply because there were so many subplots and problems that Neteyam had going on.
For instance, the scene in 'the unlikely adventures of' chapter, where Neteyam is walking weird behind Trudy, I wanted to add spinal issues because I noticed in the movie that the bullet exited his back, and not his lung. Unfortunately, I noticed that after I began the story, so I'm not really sure what to do with the detail now. I will do something, and it won't make sense, but I'm not sure I want to delete the whole scene. So, I will tweak it a bit and see how it goes.
Also, Lo'ak and Jake will get another redemption scene. Spider is just not that important to me, I'm sorry, but he just doesn't help the plot of this story. However, I love the idea of him, Aonung, Neteyam, Tsireya and all the teenagers being a squad, so I will give them all a scene near the end.
I hope you will read the sequel when it's out, because I know what's going to happen and it's much clearer than this one.
Thank you!
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FanfictionNeteyam was shot, it wasn't a fever dream or a vision. It was real. Luckily, he managed to escape death's grasp by a landslide, but that lead to a couple physical problems that may affect him for the better. Because during recovery, all issues and...
