I'm having a hard time trying to improve my writing since no one tried to comment on it or criticize it. Please comment, I need to know where I can improve.
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STAI LEGGENDO
Gate: Thus Dreamland Fought There! (Gate x Kirby Crossover)
FanfictionThe first two chapters are released early, This a monthly fanfic, and New chapters every week Warning: The early chapters will follow the manga/anime but later on become mutate into original written stories, But for now the early chapters will follo...
Please comment on my work...
I'm having a hard time trying to improve my writing since no one tried to comment on it or criticize it. Please comment, I need to know where I can improve.
Thank you for reading this small rant
